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for The fall of icarus

by Aten

person Jessica
schedule September 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ugh, this is too good! I don't wanna stop reading, but I must go to sleep so I can get up in the morning... Curse/bless your amazing writing talentedness!!! Lol. Thank you!(Btw, this is so sad! You're gonna make me cry! Also, Anzu is funny and annoying and it's kinda creepy... Just saying. GO ISHTARS AND SEXY CAKE FANTASIES!!!)
person Chitoko Kanzaki
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Honoes... I was reading chapter 18 and got curious... Then I found out that this fic didn't have an ending....
*sobs uncuntrolably*
person Shiichan921
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG.... this is a really good story, but i was slightly confused as to what happened after someone goes in when seto is with ryou.....it kinda skips!!! and i was all in the dark!!! like ryou got hurt?? again?? ack!!! and thus i was cunfused...but i kept reading for hopes that i'd find out what went on!! and i'm still a little confused, but slowly peicing things together. um... i realised early on that your style is very american.... it doesnt really have the japanese culture we're all so used to, but i guess we needed this for the story if it was the whole conflict about "my gay son, oh no!" so, you're excused from my wrath.... (no wrath really, just blank promises) so anyway, i do enjoy this story a lot, so i'm excitedto read more! yay! now i hope to god this SOB father will realise what an ass he is... and apologize to the ONLY FRICKING FAMILY he has... the son of his beloved dead wife....she died to fricking save him!!! this guy is stupid!!! (but you already know this because you wrote it.... ) KUDOS!
~~Shii
person Shiichan921
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOO HOOO on to another juicy chapter!! ......i LOVE bakura and ryou.....it is soooo hot!! yay, keep it up!
person MarikIshtar77
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Had to read this one again...it's so awesome.
schedule November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought that your story was very well done. Not many people can write off a Ryou/Bakura story as well as you did.

I especially loved the scenes with Rhea. It was cute, funny and sad. This story made me cry and made me laugh.

Well done! I love it and I will recommend it to everyone I know.
person WIEJ!
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read the whole fic, I'm luving it totally!!!!!! I wish I could write as much as you can ... WIEJ! I luv it!
person TimeAngel
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very awesome story! I hope its extensions live up to this story!
person zatken
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Dang....that was good! I've seen the story, but did not get the chance to read it until now. Since it's a saga, then I'm going to start as far from the beginning as I possibly can.

No wonder a lot of people recommyouryour stories - they're awesome!

Anyway, I still have a LOT to catch up when it comes to reading your work (lol). More power to you and keep writing :-D

Zatken
person Yamijou
schedule July 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*hands twitchAT &AT &&&&*(&^ ^^^^ ****** *%*&$$*& (is red in the face with anger)
YamiKaito: I WANNA GO DOWN TO THAT TAVERN AND KICKS THOSE....THOSE...pitiful excuses for n ben beings and get them off thei high horse...
Yamijou:*sniffles* poor Ryou! *goes to hug him* is OK, *throws Jessica into a wall and delivers a scathing lecture to ryous dad* MY GOD YOU son of a &&&&& YOUR SON LOVES BAKURA BUT THAT DOESN'T MEAN HE DOESN'T LOVE HIS FATHER! ACCEPT IT, HES NNGERNGER TO OTHER PEOPLE BECAUSE THE ONLY ONE HE'D SLEEP WITH IS BAKURA, THEIR MARRIED DAMMIT!
Yamikaito: my friend is a bit pissed, and although I agree wholeheartedly... I must say that this fic is great! I'm gonna go finish the rest now, buh-bye
*Yamijou is still ranting*