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for Steam: A Lemon Interlude

by tsutsuji

schedule April 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Brainmelt*
person Shiann
schedule December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Where is this story, 'Best Friends' located? Anyway, great job.
person Eien no Ai
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really an amazing story! The idea of Ryou and Bakura making love in only one body is interesting...I always thought they were very creative ^_^ There is also a contrast - they still want to have separate bodies and this 'ghost-sex' satisfies them only for a moment...but that doesn't mean they can't enjoy it anyway! I love how Ryou desperately needs Bakura to touch him...and to do the other things as well. Oh, and the visions make great ideas for fanarts, don't they? I close my eyes and I can see it. Imagination is great ^_^ Especially when one's reading something as wonderful as this!
PS: Re-reading the summary, I came to one more conclusion: this one-shot is much more than just a PWP! I really think so...

person Michela
schedule September 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Methinks the Rubber Ducky isn’t the *only* one that makes bath time lots of fun! (Please forgive the cliché. XD) As always, your fanfic is absolutely superb, and this, rationally explaining an encounter between two spirits sharone one body, (a concept most other stories from this series evade, in favor of eagerness to warp the reality of the true characters) certainly reveals that you areauthauthor that cares enough to establish the perfect mood. I cannot wait to read more from you!
person YamiRynEnjeru
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice XD
Not only was it Ryou & Bakura, but it was well written and kinda sad (considering their situation, then again, that really didn't stop them, now did it? =D )
Great job ^^
~YRE
person Anna
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really good...I've never read a story where any of the hikaris and yami's share bodies and this was just great...update or atlest make another like this? o.o;
person Renee
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DAMN that was one FINE interlude! Woo baby! *fans self*