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for A Not So Innocent Joke

by freewater

person deadghost
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gods, seto is such a JERK! After all Jou has done for him... he's a bitch.

Love your story!
person Velvetina
schedule October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg omg omg, i can't believe it. Poor Seto and Mokuba!!! Argh please update soon
person Kandi
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHGGGG!!! How could you??!!! You Evil, EVIL person, you!! What a totally unfair cliffhanger!!! **Grumbles** Fine. Could you finish the story, please????? *Puppy eyes* I'm DYING to know what happens!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!
-Kandi ^___^
person anon
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! What a place to end it! Now I definetely(sp) can't wait until the next chapter! Great story!!!!!
person Stabity
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAH!!! *takes out knife* If Mokuba is dead or dying, then I shall stab. STAB YA HEAR!!!!??!?!
person maxwell16
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
if you kill mokuba i WILL KILL YOU
i love him
but your story is cool keep it up and remember what i said I WILL KILL YOU
person deadghost
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that has to be the MEANEST cliffhanger of the world. Please go on with the story, I've really liked it.
bye
person Midori
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love this story. I actually like it more than An Innocent Joke, which was brilliant*lol*...I love Jou, he is so cute and in love. Hope Seto won't hurt him too much. The chapter in Arcade was so funny I was laughing my ass of imagining Seto shedding his coat! Keep up the good work.
person Angel-Belle
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hee! Hee! Funny Chappie! I think Otogi overreacted a bit to the food fight...me thinks he may be a bit jealous of Kaiba and Jou being together, hmm? Serves him right for the evil little "joke" they wanna play oor lor lil jou..
person Joey Wheeler's girl
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
XD hee hee...FOOD FIGHT....only Jou would start that -huggles Jou-
Well I reviewed your chappies when you where writting An Innocent Joke ^^...good times
Now I love that you are writting another stroy
well, I hope this ends happily ^_^!
~Ja ne