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November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ip fop forgeting to leave a review, did I remember to review A Innocent Joke?/? I like all your plot lines, the details and story chapters aren't always excellent but never the less your story as well as character writing is always a treat. Okay and the lack of lemons miff me but not everyone is good at those (myself included.) All and all I enjoyed your story, even Mr. Jounouchi's character is precoolcool!
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This Fan fic is getting better and better, I cant wait for when Jou finally finds out everything that Seto has done. I don't know how he'll react to it all, I just cant wait. Please keep writing, this fan fic and you are both too good to stop now. If you do decide to leave us hanging without ending properly, You will be bombarded with hate mail for months on end. Later. ^_^
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October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is turning into a really long story. Im so happy that seto dumped Otagi but i really want to see what happns when Jou finds out about all the lies and bets...he will find out soonr or later....looking forward to updates
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love chap12....it was so sweet at the end...please don't let Kaiba break Jou's heart
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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it so far. I hope is ends happy. Hopefully, original, but happy! I like the work you've done with the whole joke thing and I haven't read "An Innocent Joke?" yet, but after this, I may have to. As much as I'd love to say that I'm dying to read more (and I am), I'd like it even more if you continued to make this story superb, even if it takes time. It is definently in my ranks of my favorite Seto/Jou. (Go Seto!)
Keep up the good work.
-Shay
Keep up the good work.
-Shay
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October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MMMMMM... that was a nummy lemon. ;)
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!!! you upddated!!!!!! you awesome!!!! do it again please????????? and mebbe soon a lemon. the fic is great with or without but i love to see seto(or otogi, anyone really, but mostly seto) pounding into the puppy. *smiles evilly with little hentai thoughts about a certain blond dancing through her head*
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October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wanted to type up a well thought out and eloquent review for this fic but the only coherent thought in me little brain right now is. "MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!" Is that good enough? *making puppy dog eyes complete with pouty lip*
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are so great!
I'm looking forward the next chapter!
I'm looking forward the next chapter!
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October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story. as long as you don't make jou suicidal again, i mean why kill yourself when you can spite the person who hurt you by living and finding someone else even for rebound, i'll be happy. maybe this will havee joe jouxotogi, one can always hope right. (fav. couple XP, and before anyone says anything if you can see setoxjou then otogixjou isn't so farfetched, cause seto doesn't giva a damn about jou in the manga no matter what anyone says. the proof is there in chpts 249-253 or so.) hope you update again (wince) ja.