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for A Not So Innocent Joke

by freewater

person anonymous_fan
schedule December 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG you simply MUST update! PLEASE I BEG YOU! Dont leave with such a thrilling cliffhanger! lol. i cant wait for the next chapte.....I hope all goes well in the end for jou and kaiba . theyre such a good couple and it seems like kaiba is actually starting to love jou now *sigh* so dreamy lol pls keep up the great story its fantastic!
person Rachel Dracon
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoo hoo, I'm really getting into the story now, can't wait for Joey's reaction to the tape! Please update soon!
person T
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAH! I can't STAND the suspense!!...WHAT A GOOD fic...everyday I come back to it, hoping for an update..XD..aawwr...it's gonna be so sad....u.u;;...how will Kaiba even be able to make up for what's going to happen because of Otogi?..x.x;;...that bastard >.<..but yeah...EXCELLENT FIC..and i'm waiting (albeit impatiently) for the next installment! ^^;; Ja!
person Setsu
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Otogi is evil!! is he going to try and take andvantage of Joey? will Seto be able to save his and joey's relationship? Or will Joey save the relation ship? >.< Gah Update soon.
person SetoKaibaWheeler *too lazy to sign in*
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY YOU PUT IN THE LEMON!!!!!!! HEHE, ANYWAYZ, PLEASE UPDATE SOON AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE! IF I'M NOT REVIEWING, I'M STILL READING AND WILL ALWAYS BE BEHIND YOUR BACK! UPDATE!
-PS: the same thing on www.fanfiction.net
person nicky
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, how those puupy dog eyes work... :D
uhm... well chap. 15+16 are great. I was really surprised by jou's dad... I mean, I'm glad and all, but one day he's nice then he's mean and drinks and then suddenly, even though he's drunk, he's nice again... can't wait to see what's going to happen next with the whole drinking and accepting issue... please let him be nice to jou, he so deserves it *begs*
oh, and seto... wow... actually caring about jou... and getting caught at it... thehehe ( he deserves it too!) and what a wonderful... uhm... lime? i get confused with all the different notions... you know what i mean anyway, don't you?
person nicky
schedule November 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. seriously.
I read "an innocent joke" first and liked that one, but this is even better! It's all exiting and cute and fresh and... I don't know what to say...
I really loved the idea of the food fight and the whole background story about moky and also the info about jou's dad.
please update soon! *imitateshoneybrownpuppydogeyeslookingupatyou*
person RavenRae
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it so well, and i do agree with you making duke look like a jerk ~_~
person Eddie
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! Fantastic as the rest can't wait for more...And was it Otogi ( spelling?) that ran Mokuba over?
person Eddie
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! Fantastic as the rest can't wait for more...And was it Otogi ( spelling?) that ran Mokuba over?