rate_review Reviews

You know... I actually cried at the break up scene...
ahhhhhhh... I just loved the whole chapter... Jou finally helping Moky... Kaiba kissing Jou cause he just needs to... Yami's part was great too of course...
hehe... poor Otogi...
all in all: I LOVED THIS!!!!!!!!!
Let's have more of those stories! ...got another one planed yet?

O_O...I loved it...tyvm for the excellent read.

the last chapter of it, not really what I expected, but it,s an happy ending anyway !!!

Please you update? They've been dancing for a while now. I bet they're feet are getting really tired :) And Otogi's been all evil and stuff plotting in the dark for so long now I hope he didn't fall asleep. I'm only teasing. I just really enjoy this fic and I want, no I NEED, to know what happens next.

I want to know want Otogi is going to do? What will happen between Joey & Seto.
Update soon please.

Ahhhhhhhh how could u just leave it at that!? Omg! Its such a good fic. I've never really thougth about Seto/Otagi but now that i do........damn its hot! Sure Otagi is being a big of a ass but youd be pissed if Seto left u for someone else too. Plllllllllllease update soon!

Alright... honestly? I think I can't make it over Chrsitmas without another update here... so...
I'm gonna try those puppy dog eyes again...
*blinksadorablyupatfreewaterwithlovelyhugebrownorbsbegging"pweeeeeeaaaaaaaseeeeee"*

better update soon or i'll shoot your mom and your dog

oh my goodness...
what's gonna happen??????????????????????????????????
please update soon!

oh man, oh man, oh man..... I love this story!!! This is so cool, the plot, the story, Ryou going evil ass on Jou and Seto, although Seto was a bit meany on Jou at the beginning *scolds scolds*, but this is going so well, and Ryou's gonna tell Yami!!!! I can't wait, you gotta update, I wanna know what's gonna happen.... What's Seto gonna do?? What is JOU gonna do???....... What is JOU'S DAD gonna do if he finds out!?!?!?!? I need to chatch my breath, thsi is too much for me.... *breaths deeply (just breath, breathing is good, breathing is your friend....)* ok, so I loved the way you twisted Ryou into an evil bastard, I was a bit weird out at first but I gotta admit it, he's better mean than good, his bare looks on the show don't make him look very good ya know, and Seto..... THANK YOU!!! Thank you for not turning Seto into one of those fic invented tough guys that turn into softies as soon as they fall inlove, I love you alone for that, I mean one of the coolest stuff about Seto is that he's a tough ass kind of guy, without becoming an actual bastard (sometimes)
So anyways, like you already imagine I loved your fic and I can't wait for your next update.... make it soon.... please....