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for A Not So Innocent Joke

by freewater

schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really good story. Seto and Otogi being all evil at first was great before getting into the Seto/Jou stuff. Nice work.
D/2
schedule August 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. I loved it. I cried straight through the last 3 chapters. Not kidding. Very well written and it kept my full attention all the way through. Nice job.
person RabidSqurl (log in? hah!)
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very, very, VERY well done. Three thumbs up, even. :D The odd time you need to watch your homonyms, but other than that, fabulous. It was such a fun read! My only regret was that I never get to see any Otogi/Jou in there. XD
person Jessica
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Just wanted to say that I absolutely loved your story! I'm all for the 'Cinderella' story! ^-^...'specially when it comes to Seto/Jou! They are so hot together!...I like how you still maintained bouts of humor even when we were in anticipation for the foreshadowed 'bomb-dropping' that awaited us...you kept us riveted, and for that, you never disappointed!...

*scratches head sheepishly*...actually, I read this story a couple of months ago but failed to review due to my shitty laptop and its lack of immunity for school viruses (the Internet ~really~ hated my computer...-___-...)...but I loved it then and I love it now!...It was one out of a select few that were really well-written, Seto/Jou fics that had plot along with the pent-up anger/passion sex! So major props to you! And thanks immensely for sharing! ^-^
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:) I liked the story - you made me laugh, cry, then laugh again :)

You're the greatest!

*hugs you and hands you pocky and a pass to daydream about Seto/Jou for the next half hour*
person heartless134301
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story and the other one you did, 'An Innocent Joke?'. Both were really good. Keep up the good work!
person buggycas
schedule March 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehe it's better then "cruel intentions" but very similer... but then again you've probaly heard that one already I liked it though very fun
person cookie lean
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i i dont know what ta say buy i love it
person Inuyasha
schedule February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! thats the meanist thing ever!!!!1 i only read the first chapter and that is sooooooooooooooooooooooooo NOT NICE!!!!!! i dont think i can stand reading the rest of this HORRID fic. in fact.......i think I HATE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Printed out your story on FanFic! I was pist to have to come here for the lemon but its worth it

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