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for You Rocked My World

by BishojoShadow

person Sarah
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, how sad. ;_; It was good but.. really sad. =(

I loved Yugi asking Ryou in truth or dare who was the best sex out of all his relationships XD *lmao* Niiiice one Yugi.
So.. whos Ryou going to be with now..? I think he should go back with Kura. *nods* Yeah, Bakura looooves heem lol.
Nice ficcy.
person Tinka
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Very sad though. Poor little Marik diddums. LOL XD
Ryou seems like a bit of a whore though, i will admit *shrugs* i'll just pretend there was liek several years in and inbetween his relationships with everyone. So, it would be safe to assume he lost his virginity to Yugi (and Yugi to him) cos he was his first realtionship? *squee* i love that pairing. Maybe you should write a Yugi/Ryou *really wants you too* YAY for Heartshipping.

AHEM anyway.. i kinda got off track. I liked the fic! The only thing i didnt like was when you wrote "-insert lemon here-" i was like OMGWTF! You shouldve written the shower lemon dude! XD Never mind. The rest was great.

Oh and btw, you have chapter 3 (i think its chap 3) posted twice, incase you didnt know. ^-^ GREAT FICCER!

~Tinka.