rate_review Reviews

This is...amazing. I can picture it in my head, every detail of it (especially since I've read the manga in which this happened) I actually write many stories referring to Kuru Eruna (my name on both adulfanfiction.net and mediaminer.org is Priestess). If you don't mind Yami/Bakura or Bakura/Malik (I've put him with Kaiba, but that was just once) you can read my fics sometimes.

I took a look at this since I read your other story. It amazed me that even though only 7 people read it, 4 out of seven people reviewed. Isn't that something? Well I too heard of the Millenium Items creation and Theif Bakura's tie to them through spoilers in fanfics. Very good description and take on his feelings. Makes your heart bleed for poor little Theif King. I just wish I could see how cute he was. Looking at villans then looking at them as innocent children really makes you wonder what went wrong. Well, this story tells all. What am I blabbing about? Don't worry about me, the story was good. That's all you really need to know.

It's truly depressing that a fic like this gets so little attention, while the poorly-constructed drivel that pollutes the site garners tens, sometimes hundreds of reviews.

You haven't written the perfect story, but it's blasted good, especially in the midst of this cess pool. I gave it a four because... I'm stingy?

I already knew about the tragedy. And I thought it explained why Bakura hated Yami and his father so much... And why he wanted the Millennium Items. Personally I think it's sick! And I never want to have a Millennium item! Cuz the items were made from Bakura's en vil village! I guess he wants them for revenge...

Ooh...very well written. I knew mare are of the Kuru Eruna tragedy before reading this and when I stumbled upon the descriptoin I eagerly clicked on it and was not disappointed. It's a very good chappie. I really do hope you continue this, it would make a good fic. You're very good at writing Kura's feelings and emotions. Please continue writing this and I'll b sure 2 recommend this 2 anyone looking for a good read.

I'd heard about Kuru Eruna, and knew a bit about it. This certainly cleared up any misconception I had, though. Beautifully well-written fic. I liked it a lot. I hope you write more like this. It's nice to see some dark fics on here that aren't yaoi, not that I object to it. Putting aside the rambling, once again, good story. Job well done.