AFF Fiction Portal
person DracOnyx
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Continue, please! and soon!

*mutters under her breath* cold shower . . . definitely need a cold shower . . . *wanders off to find a cold shower*

person Nymphadora Tonka
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WE WANT FOURSOME!!!!!!! WE WANT FOURSOME!!!!!!!!! All four of them going at it with eachother!!!!!!! MAN WANT COULD BE HOTTER THEN THAT!?!?!?!?!?
person EgyptianGoddess
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the story so far...mmmm...VERY nice lemons! *Drools* I loved Bakura's reaction to the phone! lol! I never knew Ryou could be so bossy! OO Well we all know who wears the pants in Bakura and Ryou's relationship now! lol! Go Ryou! Hehe! More lemons! I would love to see Ryou and Yugi get together, Bakura and Yami as well, that would be so hot! Is there going to be a foursome? *Chibi eyes* Great job, but i only have one complaint, did you really have to leave it there?!!! (Chapter 4) *Glares* Enough with the evil cliffhangers already! I swear you girls (Or guys) are gonna kill me!! XD But great fic really. ^_^
person heyy13
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is cool. Its a good thing just to sit and read. With not much plot and lots of sex its fun to look at. ^.^
person writerwizard
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaah, oh my god...you have got to keep writing! You're awesome!
person LadyRuby
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh...My...God! How evil! Please, oh, please God finish this! I'm dying here! PLLLLLEEEEEEEASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!
person puffin
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start if its a story. If it is can you email when you update at puffin04@bellsouth.net? Thank you. Keep it up.
person Becky
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eep! Update this, godammit! More more more! xD
person AnimeGal4
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I CANT WAIT FOR AN UPDATE!@!!! Oh....can Yami and Yugi possibly get a lemon in the next chapter? GREAT STORY!

AnimeGal4
person Sansi
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to agree - this is interesting! Can't wait to read more. I just the YxY pairing! Please more of it ASAP