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person Naru-Kit
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Go Ryou and Yugi show those yami's of yours who's in charge, hehehehe. I just love this story so far and I also love how Yugi and Ryou are. Please continue with this story. Until next time.

~Ja ne~
person Naru-Kit
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmm me like *licks lips*, I hope the rest of the lemon is in the next chapter. Oh please let it be in the next chapter *gives the author the puppy dog eyes*. I really like this story but I have to advise you to check your spelling because there are a few words that doesn't make any sense, but other then that, great story. Well I'm going to read the rest of this story so

~Ja~

for now.
person Naru-Kit
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOhhh yum *licks lips* me love, that was great.

~Ja~
person Naru-Kit
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehe me like, but it would have been really hot if the two hikaris had sex with eachother and the two yami's had sex with eachother to. But still this was a really good fict and I loved how you made Yugi and Ryou(I just loved them). Well keep up the great work.

~Ja~
person Cherazz
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*gets bucket to gather drool* That was so damn hot...there's no other words to describe it:P Very hot and very sexy:P I hope you write more fics like this:P
person Rachel Dracon
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was hot! And really well done, you've got a lot of talent! Great story too, it was really amusing. Wonder why Bakura thought he could be Atemu though...oh well, all's well that ends well, and things that end like that end well. ^.^
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was SO HOTT!

AnimeGal4
person Deb
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL Bakura and Yami kissing was fuuuuunn!!!
Hehe yumminess
Aww im sad that the fic's ended it was kool!
Love the chapter huni! It was great!
Much Luv
Debs xx
person DracOnyx
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*laughs hysterically*

ABSOLUTELY GREAT! Talk about punishment . . . the only thing that would have made this even more restresting was if Yami and Bakura (ahem, pardon me, Atemu and the Tomb Robber) had kept going, and Yugi and Ryou had gon aon as well. But hey, it was great anyway! Wonderful job, loads of fun to read.

DracOnyx
person Dei
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE it,LOVE it,LOVE it,LOOOOOVVVVET!!!T!!! The four-some is kickass espically with Yugi and Yami! Hurry,hurry,hurry, and please put up the next "fucking" chapter. BTW,since you are sooooo good at writing these lemons, have you ever thought of writing a 6-way between the yamis and the hikaris. It would be so Cool!!! PLEASE,PLEASE,PLEASE, put up the next chapter A.S.A.P., cause me and my friends are DIEING to read it!!!!!! Ja Ne.