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*evil smirk* I have 2 ideas of reproductiFirsFirst, use some magic to turn Ryou in a girl. I read somewhere that Thief King Bakura have magic. Get him pregnant. Second, find a copy machine, and use pictures of Thief King Bakura and Yami Bakura. Then copy them. And you got Bakuras reproducted! TKBakura and Bakura, you 2 are the same person, so why argue over Ryou? And what will happen at the end? Cuz I read the end off the manga on this website I found. So I know what happens in the end. But one thing confuses me, the manga never said what exactly happened to Kura! I dunno if he moved on or is stuck in the Dream world...

*eyes widens* WTF?! I'm with RYou on that one! So confusing! Since Thief King Bakura and Yami Bakura are one and the same! Although it might be interesting if TKBakura showed up in middle, of Battle City? I want to see Yami and Marik's reactions to that! *evil laughter*

AH! That was great. . . .THIS IS NOT A COMPLAINT!!! I was just wondering how exactly does someone neatly put their hand down someones pants??? I just thought it was funny. You need to join the Yaoi YuGiOh group I'm in. I think you would fit in very well. They love bakura most of all you love Bakura most of all. and the last messege board was about starting a ways of torture page. which then lea tal talking about how to get rid of Anzu. Anyways the story was great but when did Ryou's pants come off....they were on he reached for the zipper....Bakura pounced before he got to the zipper....then suddenly they were gone and Ryou was in Bakura's hands....or was it mouth?...not a bad thing, perhaps he still has powers of the shadow relm! Anyway....why don't you try writing a Honda X Ryou...I think you could put oft off...or should I say Honda can pull it off? hee hee Anyway good story.

That was very enjoyable, almost kawii in a way, even if Thief King Bakura did seem a little ooc. I must admit thought that i've always wanted to see this pairing, it's something that i've thought about writing myself, not many people write about TKB which is a shame as he is so damn SEXY! ^_~ You could do so much with this fic , i really think that you should continue it, can't wait to see what ideas that you come up with! ^_^ Loved the lemon btw and how you drew it out, very HOT! Oh yeah, it might be a good idea to explain just how that Ryou ended up there in the first place, just an idea. Very good descron bon btw, you really panted a believable scene, but you need to work on the plot a little more if you are planning on making this a multichapter, very good fic! ^_^

PS: I have a few ideas so contact me here if you like.

EgyptianGoddessno1@hotmail.com (Ignore the other e-mail addresses)

i absolutally love this fic! i hope you will update it soon!