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for Return of the Demon

by SolitaireandXpyne

person BuffyM
schedule June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg,you FINALLY made new chappy's!!!!!!!!!*does super happy dance*Please write MUCH MUCH more!And who was talking to Seto/Sehkmet from the past that made him send his bewd on poor yugi?!*sniff*
But I loved the lemony goodness you finally gave to Ryou/Bakuraand/Joey and bakura was all nice to ryou and even joey and called ryou aibou!and he was worried about him!!!!!!!AWWWWWWWWWWW^__________^
But...who is the evil demon dude controlling pesusus?>_You can't let Pegusus haugi!ugi! >_____________________________<
A prequel AND a sequel?!?!?!? yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Yami,Yugi,Seto,Ryou,Bakura,Joey:O_o;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
I also put you on my fave stories list! XD
And you two are the reason I read/write Yaoi and Slash! XD
More Lemonygoodness!
And more Yami.Yugi/seto Ryou/Jou/bakura!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^_______^

person Kitt
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL. I love Tea and Tristan XD. And Jou/Bakura...and this story. And...
person Keysha
schedule June 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DAAAAAAMMMMNNNN!!!! Chappie 11 was well worth the wait, but it looks like it got cut off or something towards the end. I loved the threesome...so hot, OMG. Especially when Bakura was saying everything he was gonna do to Joey. That actually made me wet! TMI, lol. PLease add more soon..and if you can add the rest of the chappie, it'd be cool!! Ja ne!!
person BuffyM
schedule May 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAKE LOTS MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE EMAIL ME WHEN YOU DO!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE WRITE MORE I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER!!!!ME AND MY YAMI SPIKE WILL WON'T WE YAMI?
Yami Spike:No,we-ahh!!*ears get pulled*Yeah we will!
BuffyM:*lets go of ears*So please write more and email me and let me see your pics.....please??
PLEASE??I'll give you Chibi Ryou and Chibi Bakura!
Chibi Ryou and Chibi Bakura:*puppy dog eyes*Please write more!!
Chibi Joey and Chibi Seto:Please?*also has puppy dog eyes*
And if you write really lots of chapters that are very long*snickers*I'll give you Chibi Yami and Chibi Yugi!
Chibi Yami and Chibi Yugi:*pouts*Please??
Yami Spike:It'll be good to get them out of my hai-oww!Ok I'll stop!
*Whip sounds in the background*
BuffyM:*snickers*That's all for now,hehehe..oh and here!*hands Chibi Marik and Chibi Malik too!*
chibi marik and chibi malik:We love our rod!^_^
^_^ lol
person Mahayana
schedule May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
"You know what? I
wish you did have your own body.

Yugi could sense his Yami’ssemesement, as well as his
intrigue. \ Really? \

Yes, so I could strangle it."

*falls out of her chair laughing her ass off* You are my hero for writing that ^__^ just the whole bickering/teasing/inuendo thing between Yami Yugi, Yugi and Seto is _hillarious_ XD I'm having a gret time reading this.....and I just wanted to say 'good job' and give you a friendly pat on the back for it ^_~
person BuffyM
schedule April 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello!!I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLEASE WRITE MORE AND EMAIL ME WHEN YOU UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!AND I WOULD LIKE TO SEE YOUR DRAWINGS!!!!!!
Please?::hugs Seto:AWW cute!^_^
Seto:*_* ::going blue::
person KamuiShirou
schedule March 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MAn, I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I hope everyone gets outta the Shadow Realm safely. I'll freak out if they don't!! Plus as an extra added bonus, this story is super HOT!!! Update more soon!!
person someone
schedule March 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HI!
I like your story a lot; it's one of my favorites! I luvs S/Y/Y!!! and I do read all of the A/N's...funny!!
It's nice that you have good grammar/spelling...it's really annoying to read a good story *cough*lemon*cough* and then get held up by weird words and sentences...O.o
btw, I think something happened at the end of chap. 8, it kind of cuts off...is it all uploaded?
anyway, continue soon plz!!! >^______^<
person Ykarzel
schedule March 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
::blink:: Oh my, I'm doing this again! -_-' Man I need a life. Well, I just like to make sure that you two know how much I love you, so i just review over and over in all the places you post this. And, nobody ever reviews on affn, so I just wanted to make sure you knew that this story is as good here as it is everwhere else!! ::snuggles:: I LOVE U BOTH (::kiss:: for my pretend-crush Xpy) LOL, Julie'sthe the phone, and she's pissed that not only kissing another girl, but also that reviewing AGAIN!!! ::giggle:: Anyway, Talk to you later, story rocks, always has! -Karzel
person rubyred
schedule March 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
you all know i love you....kisses for the new cap!!! seto...yugi...yami!!!! u better not kill yami!!!! shakes fist!! FEAR MY WARTH!!!!!!!!!!!!! FEAR IT!!!!!!!!!!!