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..WTF

FINISH THE FRICKING CHAPTER!

GAH

*twitchtwitch*

....If I'm yelling at you, it's oviously good. now load the rest of the bloody chapter(s).

I've noticed that ch.7-10 have the endings missing and I REALLY don't like it! I get soo.. into the story and it...it..just...CUTS ME OFF!!!! *cries* (ahem) well....to state my ideas on your story...is....i like no make that i love it very very good writing and good lemons...mmm....lemons....*went off to own little world* ^____^; (but really can you try and fix the NO ending thing that 7-10 seem to be going through? PLEASE!!! *back to crying...but now more like a waterfall*)


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this is minor but i think the lyrics to the marilyn manson song in the beginning of chappy excursion through the darkness 1 are babble, babble,bitch,bitch ya see i have the cd . i told you it was minor

RD:um no offense but some of your chapters are still the same they were as before and please finish i want to know if they save yami or not oh and by the way the guy there facing is seto's egyptian father isnt it cuz he was the one who manipulated kaiba in the past after he took out the beast that belongs to bakura in the past but afterwards when he returns to egypt he sees kaiba in the dueling area ready to attack him with the blue eyes white dragon stone tablet behind him of wich originally belonged to kisara for her iner energy was a huge white dragon who protected her when she didnt know it yeah um to get it kaibas father had kaiba kill her and then take control of the BEWD and then his father took control of him *hint hint*and had him attack the pharaoh for his sake obviously kaibe didnt betray the pharaoh his father ordered and forced him to if his fr dir didnt he wouldnt had betrayed the pharaoh (got all this one janime.biz u should check it out its really good well gtg now TTFN TA TA FOR NOW AND PLEASE FINSISH YOUR STORIES BEFOER I COMPLETELY LOSE IT well bye ^______~

Hi I was just wondering when you are going to update return of the damon? thu you more than likely forgot you were writning it I just want to remind you.

great,great,great!more more more!

I absolutely love all your stuff! ^_^ But, just one question: are you guysmedimediaminer.org anymore? I always look there first to see if you guys have updated or not, but when I looked recently, I couldn't even find aut author profile! Are you guys writing anymore, or is that just some freak accident that might've happened when MM.org did that big overhaul on their site? Please, let me know!

RD:hey Red here nice ficcy Xpyne and solil(sry if i spelled your name wrong Xpyne)but pls pls pls pls PLS finish its getting old reading the same stuff over and over and over again even if ke tke to do it ^______^ um are seto and yugi going to save yami cuz they better your talking to a HUGE yami and yugi fan i love them Yami being the confident strong supportive guy for yugi always backing him up when needed and treasureing his sweet words of kindness and of course i love yugi*glomps yugi*he is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO KAWAII not to mention drop dead handsome/sexy howver u want to put it a regular bad ass in KAWAII mode hehe and seto is ok though im not too fond with the fact he nearly killed yugi with his BEWD SHEESH KAIBA TEACH THAT DRAGON OF YOURS SOME SELF CONTROL AND LEARN SOME YOURSELF TELL YOUR BEWDs THAT THEY HAVE TO PROTECT YUGI AND YAMI JUST LIKE THE DM HAS TO PROTECT U AND THE SAME GOES FOR MY GUY speaking of wich if u dont watch it seto then u are going to see what its like coming face to face with MY MONSTER THE MAGICIAN OF BLACK CHAOS so watch it hehe i love the spellcaster he is cool looking and is very powerful do bad i dhavehave one u_u hmm but he is still my fav for in my eyes i may not be high priest but im as strong a mage as they come well keep up the good work Soli and Xpyne ill be waiting for more TTFN ta ta for now hehe i love saying that ^____^

Okay, I'm reviewing after all the requests to. Thank you guys for finally updating! *applauds* It was a great chapter, and I think I know who the guy is! Is it the one who was working with AE Seto, I forget his name now, started with an H, I think? ^^ I was paying attention to things other than lemon the first time through, but it had been a while since I read it, so I just read the entire story over again, and it was just as good this time through =) More soon plz?

Skye

PS: As mediaminer fanart appears to have died, is there anywhere else where I could see Xpyne's art? I liked the ones she had up there and as a fellow artist, I rather enjoy seeing other people's stuff, then going about complaining about how much better everyone is than me ^^

MORE!MORE! yay!
XD please more?*pouts*
Yami Buffy and Yami Spike:*hug hikari buffy*