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I got it! I got it!! lol It was cute! *sighes* Dreadfully cute... ^_~
~KK =^.^=

Very nice. I've had a relationship like that. A little twisted, but very well portrayed. I like this quite a bit. Keep up the good work.
cheers!
- Lady Jade

This is a wonderful story.
I'll tell you a little secret.
I fight with my lover as well, and it's also a metaphor for sex.
It's wonderful, to see the flames of sweet passion burning in my other's eyes.

And it's always worth it at the end of the day.
Because when I lie next to my kanojo in bed, I feel like the luckiest woman in the world.

~*Chel*~

Wow, what a wonderful fic! I love the Seto/Jounouchi pairing and it's so rare to find one that's both well-written, entertaining *and* keeps both of them pretty much in character. I love the way yad tad the two of them interact in this fic and the ending was just so darn sweet as well!

Great job! ^__^

You know, I have the same problem with my Yami - that's the problem with having your Yami be your muse as well, I guess. Every time she gets in a snit she locks herself in her soul room.
Well, you're writing remarkably well with or without your Yami, I enjoy your stories a great deal.
S.

This was a very good story. Ya mentioned it was ya 1st 1st person present tense story... well it was well written and very... erm... cute! Yeah that's the word I'm lookin' for! I've read quite a fe you your stories. they're all real good. Keep up the good work! ^.^

Hi. Okay, I am completely confused with your talk with your Yami at the end notes, but I suppose it's mentioned somewhere in your other fics. I thought your fic was great! It was so sweet too! I liked the developement of their relationship in this story, mostly because pwp are as they say, no plot. After a couple's first kiss, they usually hop in bed in other stories. But your story was good. It's interesting to look at one of those relationships that's based on heated arguments, at least ones that AREN'T abusive, which some people like to put characters of animes that are rivals in. Anyway, I thought "Passion and Pillow Talk" was a really good story, like the kind you write sequels to *HINT HINT!!* Although I'm mainly a J/S fan, I plan to look at your other fics soon. Hopefully that'll be soon, but doubtful. Reallife takes up too much time. I hope your RL doesn't comsume all of your time and you'll be able to write more soon. Good luck.
Sinc
CA

Ohhhh...sexy...LOL! ^-^ You have to be older than you really are, dearheart. Your writing is unbelievable! Excellent!

nice...very nice....long live seto joey!!!

I got it, and I think it's cool. You did really good. I think I've told you that I really love your writing, but you can stand to hear it again right? I love your writing. And Yami, stop giving her trouble! You can't punish her for what happened with Az. It's not fair. ^_^

KK