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for Chimamire Namida

by KatrisAlana

person yoarashi
schedule December 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story cant wait for next up date and u better up or or i might die
person Kat
schedule September 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Possibly the best lemon I've read. Your style of writing is wonderful, the character's attitudes are very well researched, and it's a good plot line. I mean, it actually has a progressing plot. Not just the one-shot, chick-comes-to-the-school-and-2-days-r-sor-someone-beds her that you see so often. It's a very good story. I applaud you and await(sometimes not so patiently) your next chapter. I wanna know how it ends! Or will that be a while?
person Soulthirst
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was a very well written chapter. I hope that you will update soon.
person clhuff
schedule September 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I love this story! The description and wording is very well done! I look forward to anr chr chapter!
person Shirshirst
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a truly awesome story, but I have noticed that you havent updated for a while, when are you planning to?
person Soulthirst
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a truly awesome story, but I have noticed that you havent updated for a while, when are you planning to?
person clhuff
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story just gets better and better! I can't wait for the next chapter. I had a feeling she would end up getting kicked out of her house. I feel sorry for Mokuba though, he's so confused! He doesn't know who is with who! Keep up the good work!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Hot damn!
DD: What she said.
YD: Oh you gotta write more!!
DD: And what's up with Jou?
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Oh sweet mother goddess!!
DD: What she said!
person Yura
schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh when are you going to update this? I want more heehee