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for The Clothes Make The Spirit

by Amarin

person Felidae
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I think you experienced some formatting problems in this chapter-or you had a fall-out with the keyboard!^^
Either way, there are so many typos in this chpater, it's quiet unusual for you.
Bored Bakura..why does that sound like Armaggeddon?o 0°
person Felidae
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Mumbles under her breath)
IwillnotturngreenwithenvyIwillnoturngreenwithenvyIwillnotturn-aw, heck!
Lucky Isis!(pout!)
person Felidae
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Malik in a cheerleader uniform...?
Cute. Weird, but cute.^^
person Felidae
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Scary.
Just plain scary.
Even more than a bored Bakura. o 0°'
person Felidae
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Forget what I said, Bakura is way more frightening.
person Felidae
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I..will not..even..think..about the skirt(cringe)!o 0
person Felidae
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, man, get rid of those cheap cubes-I'mean, no one with a half-decent sense of style would wear something like that in public-well, unless you're attending the Love Parade, or something...!
person Wicabeth
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Malik in a cheerleader skirt... I'd definitely pay to see that *grins*
person aspiker
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
These insults are great! 8-)
person LadyGrey
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, great as always... I still look forward to your updates of this story. I was thinking about how you could change the phrase "Dancing with Myself" into something insulting to throw at the yami and hikari couples -- come on, they used to share bodies -- but I'm coming up blank, maybe you can take it from there. Ja ne!

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