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for my hands are tied

by rubyred

person The Mystical Dragon
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OHH Ruby... Ya know how to keep your fans waiting in suspence
person Bob G.
schedule April 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Good fanfic, but you should really look into writing with your own characters instead of using others' work. Otherwise, incredibly good erotica, you could publish!
person rizwan chaundry
schedule April 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
love it, really sexy! write more!
person Tom
schedule March 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, so what if it's sexy? Couldn't you do something nice with a boy, a girl, and a 12-foot talking dildo named Phillip? Okay, maybe that's just my sick fantasy. It's still gayer than I'd like, and I don't see where the whole Seto crush you obviously have comes from. Really, I see why you have a Spike crush (not that I'm wierd or anything, but if spike were a chick...). Well, that's all beside the point, which is that I think it's a great peice of writing. Very sexy, especially if ithad at least one chick in it. Not that I'm trying to push your writing, but as I'm related to you, you could take heed. Oh and plus I'm the demon seed of the dark lord. It's true.
person Kaiba
schedule March 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for text ext chapter. Keep writin^^
-Kim