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by YukiSohma

person Yamima
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happens next?
person celestial angel
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Job! I am surprised. This is one of the most, well nicest RxB stories I have yet to read. I like the way you did it, but you might want to make it longer. Since I also am an authoress, I would recommend that. Hope you continue very soon! I really like it!!
person Hiro.P
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a little confusing and you should describe the scene better, but I think it's a good start.
Please, update soon ^_^

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