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for Blue Eye Lust

by KlebKat

person Pegasus James
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I'm pleasantly surprised. Actually, you did the characters very well. I didn't suspect Seth was in this equation. This is a lot better than I thought it was going to be. You're an excellent writer, you have good tastes. I would like to see a bandit keith x pegasus lemon, a one-shot I think you could do a beautiful job on.
person Cobra Strife
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man... this was a really good fic! Jeez, I am amazed! I never really though of Seto, or Seth, being paired with Bandit Keith but you did and man... this was great! Heh... poor Seto... finding out he screwed the Keithster must have been nice... anyways, this fic is definetly going in my favs... you're such a great writer! Keep it up!