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for Ice Cream Romance

by Wicabeth

schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was really hot. This was just too sweet too.
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yea!!! That was sooo cute!
schedule June 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done!

tinkletimekelly
person RandomPerson
schedule December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yami in a thong?!?!?! I always pictured Yami in black boxers...but then again, I picture everyone in black boxers. Ahem. Ignore that. Anyway, good story, very sweet, and up to your usual high standards. Thanks for writing it.
person Sakura-Laurel
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit that that was probably the most realistic sex scene I've ever read. You had them go slow and steady in the beginning, and even added a bit of hesitance from Yugi. It was definitely a lot more realistic than most stories involving virgins being taken for the first time. I also liked how you added that Yugi didn't exactly know how to have sex, seeing as he was a virgin, and that Yami had to show him. It was a bit confusing as to who was thinking what, however, as there was nothing to differentiate between Yugi's thoughts to Yami and Yami's thoughts to Yugi. I definitely liked it, though. I hope to read more of your stories sometime in the near future.

Ja ne,
Sakura-Laurel
person Arainaina
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good I really liked
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!

MESSY BOYS MMMMMMMMMMMM
person Reyn
schedule February 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You did an excellent job of keeping Yami totally in character. That was awesome ^_^
person Yamima
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this one is sweeet...forgive the pun
person AnimeGal
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT!!!!! YAMI AND YUGI LEMONS RULE!

AnimeGal