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Uh, there's no Chapter 3.

Wow! This has some pretty harsh scenes in it. The situation almost reminds me of the book Songmaster by Orson Scott Card. Everyone wants poor Ryou and they don't understand (nor really consider) his feelings. This is truamatic to just read. Still good though. I read it all the way through- after checking the end to make sure Ryou doesn't end up totally screwed. At least he remained sane. That was my main fear for Ryou here. Thank you.

haloz again.. hey hey.. this fic aint tt bad either.!
but i m more intrested in 'teach me pleasure' , tt one rocks my world, i just wished there wasmore bakura x ryou in 'teach me pleasure' .. ryou's spending an awful lot tym with seto n malik.. bakura ought to get damn damn angry, damn damn soon.. hehehhehehe ~!!!!
i just dont see how yami is acting so bakura'ish in thhis ficcy. hes so bakura-ish! and bakura is so not bakura.. n wat the heck is joey suddenly popping up as cheif healer.. but all in all, enjoyable~! well thn, awaiting an update!!
ja!

Is it just me or does nobody know that the pharaoh's name is Atemu? You people are dumbasses.

Saw the first chappie on ffn..and I am just too impatient..^_^;; So I came and read the whole thing..great story!!! OKay..off to read the sequel now!

I forgot you had it posted on this site too. Silly me, lol. I don't have time to read more ch today, but I did read the scene that was cut off in ch 3 on ff.net. ^_^ Poor Ryou. *huggles* Not that I didn't know that would happen. heh heh. Well, see ya on the next review. ^_~

wow.....That was so cool....i really love this story, and i can't wait for the sequel....Please let there be something betweeen malika dn seto....i don't really like malik but in this story i think it's just wrong to have him left alone....you are such a gifted writter, you really have a way with words....Any wyas keep up the good work...i'm overlly impressed...

Sethos

Nice! I like it!!! I can't wait for the sequel!