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This better have a happy ending or I'm going to cry even more than I have already. That was absolute AGONY to read through. You're a wonderful-terrible author. I could totally feel their pain. I don't know what else to say. Um... the formatting typos were rather bothersome. All in all you have excellent grammar and spelling. Still, you might want to keep a closer eye on being redundant in a sentence. Saying someone's name at the beginning of a sentence and then repeating it at the end can throw a reader off. Still, great job and write more soon. As I said, I need a happy ending. No way you can torture your characters (no matter that they belong to someone else and you're just borrowing them for now) and then not let them find SOME measure of happiness at the end. ~THX~ Silveriss

Hi ^.^
It was long, but now I've read it. ^^
It is a super fic and I wish you would write more
The couples are super and you write very good
Greez
Malik

OMG! *glomp tackle hug* You updated! You finally updated! Yay! ^-^. I'm so happy you did! Great job on the chapter! Keep up the wonderful work!

Please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update this fic soon! I can't stand the suspense anymore! Please continue so you don't leave us all hanging? I can't wait to read what happens next so please update this!

*waves*

Hi!

I'm so glad I’ve found your stories here also, that's so cool :) I was sad when your account was deleted off FF.net :( But anyways I found you once more so I'm happy :)

Anyways..

I love the story! wonderful! I'm glad the assholes got the crap beat out them finally, Yay! Bakura, Marik, Yami, *laughs* Poor Ryou and Yugi I hope they'll turn out fine and too traumatized by the horrible ordeal they went through and all. Anyway.. keep up the great work and update when you can ok. Read ya later :)

~Razzleteddy~

I never likes the fic

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I ALWAYS LOVED IT!!!!!! :D

NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

Sthosthose innocent!!!!!!!!!

KILL ERIC, SAVE RYOU!!!!!!!!!

Aww im glad you're continuing! I thought you weren't going to! *breathes sigh of relief*
Great chapter. Poor Yund Rnd Ryou, the thought of yug having sex with his father is horrible....
I hope Yams, Kura and Marik find them soonies!
Please update soon.....*puppy eyes*
Much Luv
Debs xxx

Well it took me two days to finish it, but i'm not saying that i didn't enjoy it. I absolutly loved it. I wanted to jump in there and help out even though i knew that was impossible. I hope charles gets his. and his little friends too. Anyway i hope you update soon . no pressure or anything.

ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DO NOT BASTARDIZE SETO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HE IS NOT LIKE THAT!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS A VERY DEPRESSING STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I haven't read the last chapter, but I will. I hate it when people make Seto look like the bad guy and I hate it even more when they write stories that have Seto doing something he wouldn't. I repeat : DO NOT BASTARDIZE SETO!!!!!!!! There are too many people who like/love him and besidees, es, he is definately gay, BUT he is not a shitty bastard like you have painted him in this fic. Seto is obsessed with Yugi/Yami and could become friends with Ryou/Bakura because of their similarities. Don't insult the beautiful genius of Seto Kaiba.