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February 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey I can't wait til you add more to this. When you do, do you think you can send me an email with the web address to let me know?
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Is this complete?
Please let this not be complete.
It shouldn't end like this.
Malik should end up happy with his friends.
It's just terrible.
Please let this not be complete.
It shouldn't end like this.
Malik should end up happy with his friends.
It's just terrible.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon I can't stand the waiting.
I love this story.
I love this story.
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon *beg* I love this story. Its really great *nod* Malik is such a baka *cry* he was so mean to my little ryou *bitterly cry*
I will kick Boshis ass yeah, i will *bloodthursty look like Bakura and Marik* he deserves worse *nod*
Please write moreeeeeeee *puppy eyes*
yours Nef ^-^
I will kick Boshis ass yeah, i will *bloodthursty look like Bakura and Marik* he deserves worse *nod*
Please write moreeeeeeee *puppy eyes*
yours Nef ^-^
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can't wait i have been reading this fic since chapter nine but i alway 4got to review any who i love this fic personally i think you do bondage scene's extreemely weel i mean often people do really shitty bondage but you hit the nail on the head i really enjoyed that and yugi's dad is the sickest fuck out there besides Eric who is just a complete and total ass wipe i really like how you characterized every one it seems o be really beliveable so i hope you put up the next chapter soon sorry 4 any misspelled words i'm kinda in a rush scince i'm waiting 4 a phane call
Kree-Kun
Kree-Kun
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please don't forget the new disclaimer rule. I'd hate to see this fic removed because it was forgotten.
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August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noooooo malik!!! update soooon >< poor malik! he's so gonna be traumatized :P more!!
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July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay... You had me crying at the end of that chapter. I was also so completely pissed off at Boshi that I wanted to beat his face in until his teeth were ground into a fine paste. The way I see it I can imagine that everyone will want to keep the details from Yugi. After his experience with his father I can imagine he's emotionally fragile and finding out that Malik pretty much says he doesn't want to be with him anymore I think it would be enough to send him over the edge. I know it would with me. Anyway, update soon. You still have a great story and I still want my happy ending.
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course you deserve reviews! 8-)
It is heart breaking, the lonelyness that Malik feels --> the confusion, feelings of rejection that he is unsure about. He wants to trust someone, to feel that someone cares. Yet who?
It is heart breaking, the lonelyness that Malik feels --> the confusion, feelings of rejection that he is unsure about. He wants to trust someone, to feel that someone cares. Yet who?
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so so so happy you updated.
I've been waiting forever, and i was ecstatic when i saw the new chapter.
I really love this story, and i can't wait for you to continue it.
And thank you for writing such wonderful and amazing stories. Your stories were some of the first fanfictions I ever read, and there still some of the best!
I've been waiting forever, and i was ecstatic when i saw the new chapter.
I really love this story, and i can't wait for you to continue it.
And thank you for writing such wonderful and amazing stories. Your stories were some of the first fanfictions I ever read, and there still some of the best!