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for My Pet Yami

by MarikIshtar77

person Arias5
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*claps*
*hears yami scream*
oops...>_>
ahem...congrats on finally updating, when i saw the the start of the chapter i actually thought yami died 0_o but i read on and i want more!
kukuku..you're so evil...^_^
person White Nymph
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a good chapter, it almost makes up for it being short. Only joking, i was good though. Whats with Marik going soft, I don't get it!
White Nymph
person Nightmare
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool what *speacil things* would Yami have to do for his deck. And why's Marik being nice thats just wrong!!
person Hanyou_Wicabeth
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, sweet, merciful heavens.. You are my new best friend *bows*
I just might have to try some of these thinn myn my fiance. All three stories of this series have been so delicious. I never knew what sort of yummy bondage ideas there could be out there! I give you cookies forativativity!!

*kisses your feet*
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! Marik! I love Marik! And even though Bakura's an evil bastard, I love him, too! *applauds - yami's screaming is heard in the distance* Whoopsies!

Gah, more soon! *snuggles Marik, the dirty Chicken-Bleeder* :P

Tanya~
person Deb
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!!
Excellent chapter huni!!
The food was great! So funny!!
Poor Yami...more yummy madness in store for him! Hehehe! ^___^
I can't wait to see the card stuff! LMAO!
It's making me laugh just thinking about it!!!
Please update again soonies!!
Much Luv and Huggles
Debs xxx
person Pharoh249
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was a good fic, but i could only get through half of it before i started to feel really bad for Yami and couldn't finish. You see i love all the guys from Yugioh. Except Yami Marik, so it was really hard for me to read but it was a good story.
person Reili
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was a sadistic cliffhanger. Bad. Very bad. Anyway. Bad Bakura too. Trying to kill pharaoh Yami. Did his anger become suddenly refueled by Kuru Eruna or something? Poor Bakura. And Marik. Wow, I don't know what to think of him. I'll just go with, erm, psycho. It fits. So, you must update soon! Ciao.
person WIEJ!
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO!!!! me is crying!!!

Don't let poor jami die. Let marik save him, them .... I DON'T KNOW, just let him live!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@_@
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee, Marik's sucha sweetie!! Somehow I have a feeling that Yami's not gonna die, but if that's true...what's gonna happen when the counter gets to zero?

More soon!!

Tanya~