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for My Pet Yami

by MarikIshtar77

schedule August 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kewlness, that's a really creepy dream!! I'm glad Marik isn't dead though!
person sharpy
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...scarey torture story, yet it's interesting!
update!
person tidus2529
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like your story , i think bakura should die and yami gets together with marik. ^-^ i happen to like that pairing but there aren't enough stories. update soon
person Lully-chan
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You tricked me! >O I thought Marik was dead! ::whimpers:: I feel so used... Nice chapter though! :D
person Kat
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oo thanks for the warning at the beginning. Although, I'm still not gonna have steak today. *smirks* You would throw a math quiz in... evil you!! Soooooo, if Marik's death was a dream, was the kindness as well?

OH MY GOD!! You locked him in the basement with her?!?! For a week!?!!!! You are a truly evil person. *cackles*

KB
person Arias5
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
0_o erm...the Theater freaked me out...very discriptive and good! Oh no...not tea! I can only imagine the horror that's gonna happen >_>
person Hanyou_Wicabeth
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*laughs* Why do I get the feeling that the 'Tea torture' will leave Yami wishing he really was getting slashed with that knife?

Keep up the good work. And Bakura is scary ;.;
person Deb
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*claps*
Woo hoo!!!
Excellent chapter huni!!!
Soooo glad Marik didnt die....he told me he was so scared that you would kill him off...i had to put up with his moaning for houuurss!
Bakura is sooo hot!!! I love him all evil!! *grins*
And Tea torture!! Oh this should be hilarious!!!
Yami: Shut up, bitch! It's not funny!!
Deb: Do you wanna get tied up again???!!! *winks at Caroline*
Tea: Wwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
*rolls eyeChatChat later huni! Cant wait to see what happens next!
Much Luv and Huggles
Debs xxx
person Nightmare
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has got to be the best chapter so far.

“Any last words......mighty one?”

Yami’ glared directly into Bakura’s evil brown eyes.

“Yes, two words. FUCK. YOU.”

Ohh Yamis really going to get it now. But yami was right it was him who ordered Bakuras village to be slaughtered and so twisted him. And whats up with Marik?? did Bakura not kill him or did he return him from death and make him a mindless zombie?? And Bakura drinking blood this just keeps getting better. Bakura is onehell of a Sadist isn't he?? Cool update soon.

Love Nightmare
person Reili
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ha, best chapter ever. And I don't know what the hell was up with that little riddle thing, seeing as how at the end it seemed to haot hot happened, but meh. And Tea torture? Man, I don't know why everyone bashes her. I think the only reason I don't like her is because of all the Tea-haters I see out there. :P Well, never mind. By the way, is Yami going to die because Tea is going to be talking to him all the time? Must know. Lookin forward to the next update.