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1st of all i hate that stupid ass bitch of Tea!!!! *smoke steams from ears* and how could you put poor Yami in a room with her..... i would have broke in the second she star tal talking lol!!! but i luv the storie so far.... i almost cried when Yami saw Marik get his neck cut *tears well up* and i hope your next tourture scene gets better or worst *gets confused and falls to the floor* well have fun... i know i always do. every chap. your fan, your boi
THE Cat *meow*

Bakura held up a flogger and cracked it in the air.

“You think you’re behavior will go unpunished? I don’t think so! Tonight you’ll experience something so profound, I’m sure you’ll never forget it. Welcome to the world of extreme BDSM, pharaoh! It’s just you and me tonight........no Marik to save you’re scrawny ass! I hope you’re prepared for this......HAHAHAHA!”

Yami buried his face in the soft red carpeting on the floor. He took a deep th bth before twisting his neck to look over his should at Bakura.

“Bring it on! HAHAHA!” Yami boldly laughed back.

Good comback Yami

P.S let 'Kura win once in awhile or else its going to get boring next chapie sounds really sick and twisted!! Cool!!!!!!

Brilliant through and through, intense and addictive. Damn you from distracting me from my thrilling essay! :p Yay bloodlust!
Meh, I can't say stuff that makes sense very well. Just keep it up :)

I've been reading you fic for a while, and *grins sheepishly* im bothered to review for it today... *THUMBS UP*

OMG!!!! This chapter was...........was..............there are no words to describe it. It was awesome!!!!!! It rocked!!! It was the best (and coolest) chapter so far.

Awww, Marik's being all sweet and understanding. I like him like that. Can you put more Marik/Yami stuff in? That was great.

Oh no! What's Bakura going to do?! How will Yami survive??!! This is torture! Please update soon!

OH yea!!! bring it on!!..*ahem*....good chapter. *prepares popcorn for next chappy*

Hey, w00t. Marik is my hero. And Yami is today, too. Laughing at everything. That is one of the oddest analogies I've ever heard, but it flows with your story. ^^

Yayness!
Excellent chapter!!
Marik/Yami was cute!!!...and HOT!!!
Lmao Bakura walks in while they are doing 69 hahaha...the picture of Kuras face in my head will stay with me forever hehehe!!!
God i loved this chapter!
Cant wait to see what happens next huni!!
Much Luv
Debs xxxx

hehehe..."toyz 4 boyz" hehehe, wellz you sure know how to keep this story going i wanna read more of the torture...btw i can't believe that shadow game was real o.0 luckily marik didn't die...ah good ol' BDSM...keep it coming!
^_^ Can't wait until the next chappie ^_^

This story rocks but I'm kind of scared of what Bakura will do to Yami. (fear) Update soon ^-^