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for My Pet Yami

by MarikIshtar77

person Kat
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“If I stink, you’re ugly-and that doesn’t wash away, porcupine head.”
*falls over laughing* Bakura wins the "best insult" prize!

Sheesh, gotta wonder about Marik almost hoping he'd screwed a corpse. Oh wait... thre are already dead anyway, yes? Ah, so it's not too far off now. *smirks*

*whimpers* piercings... there too? (wrong time for me to read about the nipple piercings) Oooo and it vibrates?! Okay, that helps me! *laughs*

I feel sorry for the Pharoh. Okay, when I'm not snickering.

KB
person Debs
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My god girl, you amaze me!!!
This chapter was AWESOME!!!!
Hehe and the piercings were sooo funny! Hehe sorry Yams!
Bathroom bit was niiice! *grins....innocently of course*
Can't wait to see what happens next!!! I washapphappy when i saw 'Chapters [2]' on the thingy hehehe!
LOL the hairwash! Hahaha you know exactly what that reminded me of! *grins knowingly*
God Marik is so hot! I agree! His ass is FFIINNEEE!!!!! *faints*
Bakura: Hey!! What about me, bitch??!!
Deb: Now now Kura-chan, you know you're my fave.....you too Yams...
Yami: -___-
Please update again soonies! ^___^
Much Luv
Debs xxx
P.S. I hope you add the 'Ride my hat!!' bit soonies hehehehehehe
person White Nymph
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now that was mean, I understand that Yami was a git, but come on giving him piercings.....okay, maybe it wsa kinda funny, i still feel kinda sorry for him though, ah well nice chapter and i hope to be reading more soon!
WN
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omfg you are soooo evil! HAHAHHA THIS IS SOME SWEET ASS SHIT! What the hell is it about hurting this sexy bitch that turns me on? Who fucking cares write more!
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That is one big bathtub. hehe. Honestly, this was like the awesomehapthapter *ever*!! Though I can't help thinking Yami's having a bit more fun than he's letting on...;) So Marik doesn't like his hair washed roughly, huh? So cute, considering his previous activity! hehe. Can't wait for more.

~Tanya, who now has an odd craving for pancakes...
person Reili
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, poor Yami. I feel sorry for him. Nasty nasty Bakura and Marik, making him suffer like Hell. (Hehe). Lovely chapter, I must say. I hope you update soon!
person arias
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehehehe..so much torture so little time, update quickly! i want to read more......
^_^
person Nightmare
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Exellit'it's really here!! This is so cool!! I hope 'Kura and Marik teach Yami a lesson (a lesson involving a whip and chains!!! and yes I most likely am as evil as Bakura) because he had no right to be mean to Yugi I am really looking foward to the next chapie

Love Nightmare
person Xeno
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! Everything looks faboo and I'm going to enjoy reading every chapter you plan to post.

Primo excellent, Babe!!

Luvs and Hugs-Xeno
person Sarah
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I Love Yami getting hurt! ^^ Oh, this will be so hot.