rate_review Reviews

Great little side story. Loved it.
I must admit i felt sorry for Bakura getting the mel. Rod up his ass..umm..ouch. and his deck being fucked up. Poor diddums. lol.
I loved that Yugi just used pre-mixed pancakes. LOL. As if you would be bothered making them for scratch. Silly Yami.

Great stuff! Keep on writing!
<3 kel

I absolutely loved this fic. You are a freakin genius. I hope to read more of your stories. ^_^

konnchi-wa
hi how are u ? must be great if u can make a great fic huh?!? (look at me, i'm such a suck up)
anyways u did awesome i never have read a fic where yami was so vunarable it was werid but cool none the less.
i'm really glad jou and yugi never worked out and marik didnt die.
but 1 question and 1 request.
since jou and seto were hagnin out were they a couple (i figured it but u never really said..)?
and please PLEASE make a sequal (i wanna know if yugi and yami work out) see thats why all the butt kissin.....
well.....g2g vash is callin thanks bye !!!!

The hell you aint much of a writter, you are too good, probably more than me, I got expeirience writting but I had to write for stupid assed kids! This sight is candy.
I like this story, very nice and well written, I'll read more of your stuff and stop bitching at Yuugianal, that BASTARD!

shit this is really good I hate YAMI I can't wait to read the rest of it it's relly good

Cool ending!!! STOP BEING MEAN TO BAKURA!!! Sorry about that. How could Yami do that cheating! In a duel! It just isn't right. But yeah really cool sorry to hear about you illness but its really great to have you back and writing

Lots of love from your neighbourhood prince of Darkness

omg! you we're sick! and all this time i thought you forgot about your fic!?
wooh...very good ending chappie! some yugi/yami moment really cheered me up! ^_^ loved it!
I can't wait until you feel better and continue to write...but still...having a near death experience is kinda interesting...wellz i can only hope for the best and take care of your self!
~*peace~*

Shit girl! You BETTER not die before finishing your stories! *hugs tight* Hope you're getting better and take your time, kay? ;)

Sweet ending! Loved Yami mooning Bakura. That was just priceless. You know, reading about Yugi's tea-ding ing habits and the way Yami eats his pancakes just made my teeth ache. Loved it!

Oh my god! I'm so glad to hear you're recovering, but damn... what you ended up with! Get lots of rest and enjoy the flights the pills send you on. Here's hoping your recovery speeds up!

Kat

Awww sweetie *hugs* *sniff* I'm glad that you are better. that is not a way to spend a summer -__- but at least you found out in time.
okay off of the depressing stuff. wow Yami sure did change, but sometimes change is good^^ "after sex-pancakes" lol mmmm....i can see that too <<