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for What is Sex?

by Shyao

person Mamita
schedule March 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi I loved your fic for these two brothers, I love incest and if these brothers are like me even more, hopefully follow very soon, I hope they do more fics, I really like writing, is well, thank you very much and kisses .
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@tidni.com
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, good job with this one. M/M is not my normal pairing, but this was done well. I think using Seto/Mokuba was a good idea, because they never do go into their sexual orientation (at least not from what I've seen) so I've never formed an opinion one way or another if they're straight or not.

You handled the whole sex scene well too, especially considering it's a pretty delicate subject. Keep up the good work.
person m89
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... verdict is: one of the better stories on this site if you like yaoi.
person ShadowRaven
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was definatly an interesting story! It all started with a simple question. Very Interesting! I can't believe that Gozuburo raped Seto! *GROWL* THat rapist deserves to be tortured slowly and Painfully! So keep up the good work.^_^ SetoXMokuba are truly my second favorite pairing, SetoXYami are my first favorite.
person Raku
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome fanfic! I'd love to see more of this pairing from You! You totally rock! Keep on going with your fanfictions! I give a ten to this one.
person aaron mankowski
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great but a litte slow moving
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, very nice. Mokuba and Kaiba go quite well together...
person Rebecca
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo!! Is it really truly really Over! ::sobs:: it can't be ::sobs even more:: You mean no more chapters for this very very very Great! fanfic ::grabs and huggles Mokie and then hides in a dark corner to sob quietly to self:: ::sniff:: NOOOOOOO! I wish you would write more....plz maybe...tee hee
person Sora
schedule August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story. I don't really like the pairing but this was an exception. It was good and well written. There are just one thing that bugged me though....The way Seto kept calling Mokuba Kiddo, even during sex, didn't really fit...it was kinda creepy. But other than that i loved it. Great job. ^ ^