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for It Started With Snow

by Brieann

person Sushi
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this story for some time an's g's great. I can't wait to read more. LOL. it's rich that Yami can carry the babies. Keep up the good work
person Yami's_Princess
schedule September 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely great! Very well written and fantastic, keep it up!!
person Kalie Mitsuke
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update asap! I want to know what the birth will be like and are these dreams like a warning to Joey that his dad will be back. And why does everyone in storys always have Joey's dad as a cold heartless bastard that likes to pound Joey to pieces? Anyways please Update Soon!
person Kat
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a lovely, sweet chapter! Although, I did just about gag over that sandwich and I did laugh hysterically with the bathroom question. I can definitely see Yugi asking about that. I've got a friend who's just started her 7th month and I'm so going to ask if it felt like fish swimming when her daughter started moving. She'll laugh herself silly, that's for sure!

Oh Gods, I never thought about the initials! I just about fell over howling when I read that part!

Can't wait to see what Yugi does.

Kat
person FuKouHei (2 lazy 2 log in)
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I finally decided to review. I love this story 2 pieces. I hope u update soon.
person Katsuu
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's really good, keep writting. I can't wait to read more.
person puffin
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I review when I found this on ff.net. Its just as good as I remember. I was wondering when you plan on updating? I would really like it if you did soon. Also were in the world did Yami learn about Braxton-Hicks Contrations? I mean he's what a 5 thousond year old sprit. And back then they did have or even know what a braxticksicks was. I not tring to flame you I'm just wondering where he learn what is. Oh well its your story. Keep it up and please update soon.
person Tai-Earth
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hope you pot alot more. that whole hitting thing made me sad. iam like praying that jou forgives seto and loves him the same if not more again
person thearch
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fic was definitely worth the headache i got from staring at the screen for sng. ng. Good fics are a treat, and I thouroughly enjoyed it. Keep up the good work!
person soultaker
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The fics great!! Please update really, really, REALLY soon!!!!!!! 8)