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for It Started With Snow

by Brieann

person Patrick
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again a truly superb showing of literary genius, and just plain old awesome creativity. I loved getting to see Yugi on top for once, to often that situation is neglected in alot of Yami/Yugi fics. You are the Queen of awesome sex scenes, they are superb and just so vivid, makes you feel you were there really. All I can say is that I'm waiting with baited breath for the new chappie and that if ever there was a truly wonderful author out there, it would be you. Keep up the good work
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it! I love this story. You have to keep writing, I wanna know what's gonna happen with Yugi and Yami and Joey's babies. I think the story is great and I always look forward to updates. I love your story. *__*
person Sushi
schedule September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so enjoying this fiction. I think you've done such a great job. I can't wait until the next chapter
person Patrick
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading your story for quite awhile now and decided now was as good a time as any to review. I truly love the story, I'm a massive fan of Seto/Jou fics, and you do it so well its almost breathtaking. You write with such finesse its hard to believe you aren't a professional writer, unless you are of couse, and then the folly would be on me :P. I love how you never let your reader get complacent at the end of a chapter, you always have some way of catching the readers attention and keeping coming back for more, this is the sign of a true literary genius. I hope you keep up the good work, I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter
person Raven Rae
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yami pregnant....8-| that does not govery well with my yami who has a thing for the pharoh unlike me who has a thing for the tomb robber. but hey it keeps the boat afloat and the story going, specially since most fics have yugi is always on bottom. yeah yugi he gets to top off yami...(runs off and laughs at her yami sulking in corner) yugi diserves it having to deal with a pharoh as a yami. snicker snicker (gets bonked upside the head by her yami)
okay okay just reviewing to tell you how great the story is and that i cant wait to finish reading it and see whats happens to yami!!! >:) (runs away waving bye as her yami comes at her with a giant hammer) Bye bye
person day dreamer
schedule September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was really good up untill the mpreg started happening, i gotta say im not a fan....apart from that exellent though.
person FuKouHei (2 lazy 2 log in)
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy! I love this story to pieces! Yea! Continue soon.
person Dutchess Murasaki
schedule September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story rocks! *wonders* Why do a lot of the great Seto x Jou stories out there have to do with SNOW?! I mean, I'm talking about the story Snowed In on ff.net by insight-to-insanity. It's a great story. I suggest it to all.

Anywho, this is the first Mpreg story I've ever read, and you make it hilarious. In seminary today I was reading the part where Yami was screwing Yugi on Seto's kitchen table and I was horny >_> that was so mean of you.

Please update soon, this story rocks!

p.s.- do you have an account on ff.net?
person Katrina VenTassel
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sup? I love the fact that Yami might have to carry the baby. That would be so cute! ^_^ I love the story so far and hope that you don't do anything to Jou or the twins. Love ya lots. (not that way hentai) How will Yugi take to not being able to carry the baby? And will yami do it for Yugi? This will be to cute for words. Also, I have a friend and if I can I will get her to do a pic for this story. It will either be of Seto and Joey or Yami and Yugi. Either way one of them will be pregnant. Like I said before, Updat soon and I love the cute ass story!!!!! ^_^
person DrkMnComikker
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is an awesome fic.

i am just dying to know if it's Yugi or Yami to get it?

YOU'RE A MURDERER!!!