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for Clarity of Passion

by EVILMJ

person Elaya
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Must review....Must review....

Honestly, what very messed up people indeed! What is this new case Joey will have? Is Tea really sane? *pictures her rocking in a soft, white paded room not saying a word* and what drug has Mokuba been taking?! LOL!

This is a really really good intro to the sequel of 'Nobody Lives Happily Ever After' Keep up the good work!

Keep on Writin'
Elaya
person aspiker
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A soon to be twisted story starts with a lot of messed up people --> especially this bunch.

Sounds like sometime in the next few chapters you've got 3 sorts of hell waiting for Yugi. (hehe)

Looks like this is going to be a great sequel. Looking forward to reading more...
person Kat
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo great beginning! I can't wait to see what Joey's casecase is. Dayum, Jerry Springer and Dr. Phil would have to do a tag team deal on these folks! Woohoo!! Malk's back! Yes!

*yawns* okay... *blinks sleepily* can't wait for next chapter. I'm betting this will be a hell of a ride, just like the last story.

KB
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: Hell yeah! The Evilness returns!
DD: Go MJ!! This is gonna rock!!
YD: Can't wait for the shit to start.
DD: Must you always be so crass?
YD: *rolls eyes and points to self* What part of "I'm your dark side" don't you understand?
person DracOnyx
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just one question . . . Yami is dead? Gone . . . as in completely? Not too clear there . . .
At least Marik is here now . . . *sigh* ah, my gorgeous blonde psycho makes his entrance. You gotta love that boy. Glad to see things aoingoing on well . . . keep it up hun, you know you've got us all hanging on your every word.
person u
schedule March 21, 0000 at 12:00 AM
more please... and James is so cute!
person LK
schedule March 21, 0000 at 12:00 AM
Evil update! I want more of this! Great job. I love the clues he had to sort through and process. Great writing. Still can't wait for more.
person Anon
schedule March 21, 0000 at 12:00 AM
ureal AND unlikely i'll try to catch anything else you've wriiten
person jeannette
schedule March 21, 0000 at 12:00 AM
it's simply beautiful. i can't wait to read more
schedule January 27, 0000 at 12:00 AM
Riley got what he deserved!! *runs around the room cheering* okay that makes me sound a bit weird, but I don't care. I’ve hated Riley from day one and never understood why Joss didn't just kill him instead of Tera.

Pleased you like the site and story part four was currently being written, until I took a break and saw you had up dated!! and you’ve inspired me to write a prison fic just need to get all my other fics finished first, I promised myself I wouldn't start something new until I had finished one of my fics, it's not working very well Daddy being a case in point LOL any way back to the grind stone can't wait for more!!!