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for Clarity of Passion

by EVILMJ

person kool
schedule July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What an intriguing story!!! I'm on the edge of my seat, waiting for what happens next.
person Nancy
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay another update *dances* your writing is great and i love your story! Sorry to hear about your living on the eastern coast, with any luck you can get some more chapters done before the big freeze comes :P
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: Ok, we are NOT going to see that movie...if it freaked MJ, it'll KILL us.
YD: *rolls eyes* Whatever.
DD: Gods, Seto's totally messed up.
YD: Not to mention Isis.
DD: We await the next chappie.
YD: Oh, MJ....highliner fillet.
DD: Great, noe'se's going to have nightmares!
person DracOnyx
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yup . . . you should definitely work for the DMV *grin* However, my muse version Marik is absolutely adoring what you're doing with him . . . Seph is having trouble keeping him from bouncing, and let me tell you, a bouncing Marik is a very scary thing, especially when he is your muse. Love the story, and can't wait to see it continued, as always.
As for the movie . . . just remember this hun . . . if the big freeze does hit, it won't hit NEARLY as fast as that movie made it out to. It would take at least several days, not minutes : ) So you'd have plenty of time to come visit me : ) Or YDDD : )
person Kat
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo the case gets more interesting! *squ* I * I can't wait to see what that's about! Ooohooo Malik's a "watcher" Kiiiinky! *snickers* Creepy as hell too! Still, always, etc. *G*

Poor Yugi. Seto... umm, prozac sounds good right now. *smirks*

That dream of Isis' is just freakier than all get out. *blinks* Okay, seriously weird. Can't wait to see what's blocking her "transmissions". Sorry, long day, brain's not doing well.

Oh, you turn into a fish stick? Hon, I'm in California. They keep telling us that eventually we're gonna split off and sink.... *winks* Now's the time to buy "beach front" property in Nevada and Arizona.

La
KB
person aspiker
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It does look like Yugi is slowly sliding down the rings of hell, with ample help from Seto. Good forshadowing in previous (yugi writing "word" on wall) and this chapter. 8-)
person DracOnyx
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Who me? Reading minds? Never . . . although my hikari would probably smack me for lying : )
Great chapter, as always. Seto's obsession is very disturbing, as is my fav. blonde menace and his little plans. So, Yugi knows something is missing, but doesn't remember Yami exactly. Vera interestin. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.
Until next time . . .

DracOnyx
person Elaya
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't get the last line.... *Indigo...oh shit* I just don't get it.

ANYWAY, other than that, groovy chappie! :) All smiles and hugs for you!

Keep on Writin'
Elaya
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: Hey! Did you read MJ's disclaimer?
YD: *runs to check mail* Nope, she doesn't own it yet.
DD: Gods! Seto's insane!
YD: I love it!!!
DD: Keep up tood ood work, you pain in the ass.
person Kat
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo 'nother great chapter! Joey's new case sounds goooood!
“Or, you could do it for me, you Mook!”
Ah, there's the old Joey showing up for a bit! *laughs*

"He surveyed the contents of the room with an appraising look, with his head turning from her direction Isis was not able to see the calculating gleam in his eye, all warmth gone from his expression."
[insert suspenseful music here] Now I really wanna know what he's up to!

Whoooo that was one hell of a dream!

"YAMI
What the hell did it all mean?"
Does this mean he might be coming back too? I mean, now that the items are restored... wait, was the puzzle restored too?

Kissing Mokuba, making love to him, looking deep in his sensual indigo eyes.

*Indigo….oh shit.*
*cracks up* Oh shit is right! This really oughta be gooood!

KB