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for Clarity of Passion

by EVILMJ

person Jess
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story! No, scratch that. This is a great story! I'm sad to see that you haven't updated in a while, and I know it's probably too much to ask that you continue again, but I'll ask anyway. So, please update! I love the detail in the story, especially the medical terms used when Bones was examining the dead girl's body and explaining things to Joey. I enjoy the interaction between Kyla and Malik, as well the mystery surrounding the sexy Egyptian. You have a wonderful writing style, and you actually depict the characters as adults. I just love this story! I hope you update soon.
person Leighc
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*grins holding up a t-shirt that says "I survived reading the first story and these four chapters straight through. I want my mommy"* Hello love. You certainly are worthy of the word Evil introducing your name. I can't wait to read more of this. Naturally take your time though of course. Great things come to those who wait, no?
person Pharaohess
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kill Seto, free Yuugi! ^_^
person Lady Elfskye
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yeah!! Here we go again!! Damn! Eone one is so messed up, and we haven't even gotten to most of them yet! Whoo hoo!! Let's get this train rollin'!! I just know I am so gonna enjoy this!!

Lady Elfskye
person Lady Elfskye
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok! Now that I have finished catching up, I just have to say.............AMN!AMN!! I am totally speechless!! This is sooo fu*ked up!! I love it!!! Keep it comin'!!

Lady Elfskye
person anon.
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! So much drama! I love it!!!! Please continue this story!
person Kat
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*ks* ks* I have to ask. The curiosity is too much... rubber chicken??

*G*

Dayum... That Joey/Isis lemon was effing good!! Ooooo I cannot wait until Yugi finishes figuring things out. If Yami comes back, that's gonna be soooo fun! (I hope). I feel bad for Mokuba. Here's hoping that Seto gets a kick in the head sometime. Not too soon, though. He's way too much twisted fun.

Crikeys girl, Malik is just evilly good. (*G* Gee, does that make sense?) Frickin' sexy as hell too.

I can't believe that I almost missed that you'd updated!! I about screamed when I saw that you had.

KB
person Elaya
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOT THE RUBBER CHICKEN! NOOOOOO!

Okay, this is what happens when I'm on a sugar rush. ANYWAY, nice chappie, AS USUAL. Great suspense building tactics! There was only ONE thing you haven't touched on. Téa's life....Honestly, what DID happen to that friendship-loving-homicidal-freak child? LOL! But excellent writing nonetheless!

Keep on Updatin'
Elaya
person DracOnyx
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GO MALIK! MUAHAHAH! *snuggles her muse* Aww hun, she writes you with such flare . . .

Okay, he's sulking. I haven't been paying enough attention to him lately ; ( Ah well . . . the story is as intriguing as ever. Can't wait to see what Yami is going to think of all this, because I get this feeling he's still out there somewhere, and Yugi's going to find him (or remember him) eventually. And gods help Seto when Yugi does.

Can't wait to read more : )

DracOnyx
person Elaya
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! The Day After Tomorrow was the greatest! LA LA LA LA! Don't worry, that crap probably won't happen. If anything, the temperature will rise and we'll all melt like ice-cream....Okay, not a good thought...

ANYWAY, I understand the line now! HA!

Nice chappie, very interesting! I hope that you'll update soon!

Keep on Truckin'
Elaya