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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This is excellent, and I am so glad you aren't stringing Yugi and Yami along for 18 chapters before letting them talk! Thank you for the new chapter, and please e-mail me when you get Gravitation 2 up please!
Ja ne
Ja ne
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this pairing (NO it's not overdone!) and I can't wait to see what happens next! Great story!!
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEY WOW! This is awesome! Keep writing, I love it! Yami X Yugi rocks ^_^ and Marik is gorgeous, him and his Yami. :) w000t. I am really enjoying this, especially when Ryou spoke and then Bakura did too ^^ though Bakura's nasty, he roks too ^^ blah, I hope to see mof tof this coming out of you, it's really good! Keep up the good writing!
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really really good story! I love it! I hope you update soon!
^_^CHEER^_^
^_^CHEER^_^
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You rule, along with Marik! What a cool, smart guy!
Now it's getting angsty, but hey! Yami said he loves Yugi. It's a start!!!
Great chapter! Please update ASAP
Now it's getting angsty, but hey! Yami said he loves Yugi. It's a start!!!
Great chapter! Please update ASAP
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, talk about a heart rencher. That was amazing. I could see and feel what they were doing and going through. Please update as soon as you can. I want to know if Yugi will be alright.
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! This is amazing! I love it! The suspense just kept building, my excitement was climbing, and then wham! Angst! I hope Yugi is alright! I was so sad when Yami thought Yugi's reaction to his touch was disgust. I was like, "No, Yami, you idiot!" Great writing! I'd love to read more of this! Could you email me when it's updated? Thanks:)
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DracOnyx, you're back! HAPPY!!!
This is another of your amazing stories, please write some more! I laughed so hard when Yami freaked out on Marik for kissing Yugi... but now you've almost killed Yugi! That was /really/ abrupt, btw, and I'm sure it was supposed to be but right at the end I had to read it twice to make sure I'd understood. Anyway, I've been working on a story with a similar plot, but how can you not write about the cutest couple in YGO getting together for the first time? KAWAII!!
Okay, done rambling. Please Write More! And check out my first chapter if you get a second, would you? I'd love to hear what you think (and it's dedicated to you!). It's called Strangers on a Train.
yGreyGrey
This is another of your amazing stories, please write some more! I laughed so hard when Yami freaked out on Marik for kissing Yugi... but now you've almost killed Yugi! That was /really/ abrupt, btw, and I'm sure it was supposed to be but right at the end I had to read it twice to make sure I'd understood. Anyway, I've been working on a story with a similar plot, but how can you not write about the cutest couple in YGO getting together for the first time? KAWAII!!
Okay, done rambling. Please Write More! And check out my first chapter if you get a second, would you? I'd love to hear what you think (and it's dedicated to you!). It's called Strangers on a Train.
yGreyGrey
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought I would take the time to read your story since you have been reading mine! :)
You are among a small group, poor Dragondreamer YamiDragon, who is a best buddy hasn't gotten me to finish one of her storyet!yet!
Most of the problem is due to the fact that I am a very busy working mom who lives in the land of hyperstress and barely has time to herself ( I have a feeling you know exactly what I am talkign about)
Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I think you have great talent. Even though my taste runs to gore and other dark things, I did enjoy your story. Nice Angst! I think your writing is very smooth and effortless and I will keep an eye out for the next chapter.
EVIL MJ *proprietor of Hell*
You are among a small group, poor Dragondreamer YamiDragon, who is a best buddy hasn't gotten me to finish one of her storyet!yet!
Most of the problem is due to the fact that I am a very busy working mom who lives in the land of hyperstress and barely has time to herself ( I have a feeling you know exactly what I am talkign about)
Anyway, I just wanted to let you know that I think you have great talent. Even though my taste runs to gore and other dark things, I did enjoy your story. Nice Angst! I think your writing is very smooth and effortless and I will keep an eye out for the next chapter.
EVIL MJ *proprietor of Hell*
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June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was very good please continue soon I wish to see if yugi makes it.