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for Give Me Eyes To See

by FireWeaver

person FireWeaver
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, I'M GOING TO PUT THIS IN CAPS JUST SO PEOPLE CAN SEE THIS CAUSE I'M NOT SURE IF PEOPLE SAW MY LAST ONE AND I THINK IT'S TIME I WROTE A NEW ONE. TO ALL OF MY READERS, I LOVE YOU ALL SO MUCH FOR READING BUT I CAN'T GET INTO MY ACCOUNT ANYMORE AND WASN'T ABLE TO FOR MONTHS SO I MADE A NEW ACCOUNT WITH ALL THE SAME STORIES WITH UPDATES. MY NEW NAME IS FireWeb AND I HOPE TO SEE YOU GUYS AGAIN SOON! THANK YOU AGAIN FOR READING!!!
person Yami Loezzy
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yami Loezzy: Wow, what a GREAT story!
Hikari Loes: Update! Update! Update!
Yami Loezzy: *hits Hikari Loes* Shut up, you don't have to repeat yourself!
Hikari Loes: Gomen. Well, like I said: UPDATE!!!
Yami Loezzy: *hits Hikari Loes again*
Hikari Loes: X__X
Yami Loezzy: Please continue with the story, we really liked it. ^_^
person Crystallinetears
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
moremoremoremormeomreomremoremroemoremore!!! please!!!!



pwease? *puppy dog eyes*
person reviewer
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! >_< I like this fic.
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I'm liking it so far! It's interesting just how this thing is playing out...I hope to see more soon. ^^
person Funky Monkey
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOp, Eeek!, that waz FUNKY! like duuuude you gotta update soooon!
person Terra
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I checked out your works after the wonderful review you left me. Those who review also tend to write I have discovered. Now this story grabbed me. I loved it. You have done a good job defining your characters, giving them distinct personalities. The plot sounds very interesting. Belive me, you got real close to an honest sounding teen. I have one around the house. I'm looking foreword to your next chapter. And getting a new muse is easy, toss out some muse chow, works for me.

Terra
person BiPanda
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I should have signed in... but I didn't. I kinda like this fic. You made Malik very in character, which most don't do when it comes to pairing him with someone gentler. Ryou and Malik is my favourite pairing! Thank you!! T_T
person Haruka666
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is absolutely great! The plot is very interesting and Ryou is so adorable! ^___^ I hope you will update soon!
person Sai
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good start. i hope u continue on it soon!