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for Beachin' Trip

by Ykarzel

person Alaya SaDiablo
schedule March 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hikari Alaya: Oh that was so great! - Yami Alaya: I liked the games. Especially all the Truth or Dare bits. - Hikari Alaya: I don't know that bit Seto made Yugi do was just mean. - Yami Alaya: I hope you do a sequel. I also hope you include something about those chains. *evil grin* - Hikari Alaya:... -.-;; Actually I like that idea. ^_^ Anyway we both really hope you do a sequel.
person Sarina Fannel
schedule February 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
^_^Loved ya fic! Very very cool n' the pairings were ect ect too! ^_^ Mm, loved Bakura-chan's new appearence btw:)so sexy^_^hehe, will there be a sequel to this by any chance? Maybe them all goin' to a Cabin together or somethin'? Loved it when they played Truth or Dare too:)
person Abeno Yasuaki
schedule February 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
....^^; It did work more this time, but it still cut the fic. Maybe make it a two parts?
person sTaR SNipEr
schedule February 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I saw this alread yon Ff.Net. It's good!!! But I don't thw whoel thing showed up. Check again and you'll se what I mean.


Buh Bye!! ^_^



s.S(aka sTaR SnipEr
person KK^_^
schedule February 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was waiting for this fic to show up here! I first read it on Yami and Seto's fanfiction realm, but I wasn't sure how to review. Anyway, I have to tell you I love this! This is soooo one of the coolest fics I've read. Just one little comment tho-it could use some lemons...

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