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for Beachin' Trip

by Ykarzel

person Yamisammy
schedule December 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hiya great fic, i think it is fab you should continue.......Hope ya do keep up the good work. plz e-mail me if you update or do another fic like this.
person Ryou
schedule November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice. please write more like it
person Ree
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well, for this one i'll bring in my Yami. her name is Angelique....she handles all of the angst, depression, etc. in my stories while i do the fluff, romance, and hard-core stuffs. now, we both have stuff to say on this fic, so i'll let Angel go first. *grins broadly*

Angel: Arigato, well, i must say, this fic is certainly humorous. i've never laughed so hard in my entire life, especially the scene where Ryou takes off his shorts and pretends to fly with his and Bakura's, that was classic. and of course the food fight. but since i don't deal with humor that often, i laugh very rarely, so i commend you on that.

Ree: Don't listen to her, she laughs all the time. *receives sound whack from Yami* ITAI! *rubs bump on head* anyway, it's my turn now. well, i love the romance and fluff here, especially when Yami and Yugi are watching the sunrise. and of course, when Joey and Seto finally admit they're good for each other and hook up. *applauds*

Angel: Now, Ree, don't go on forever, let's cut this short. You're a great writer, and we're going to read these over and over again. Ja ne! *grabs still laughing and applauding hikari and drags her away from the fic before she laughs herself into a frenzy*
person Ryou\'s baby girl
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is sooo kawaii!!! ^_^ I love it! Ryou is so silly ^_^
person IYYASHI
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was AWESOME!!!
person CarrytheSheepdog
schedule May 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yoh! I wanna join CAA! I'm 13, and I've been reading lemons ever since I was 11. Me and Li LOVE this story! So keep it up!
person LadyJade
schedule May 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Funny. So funny. I laughed my @ss off. This is a really great fic. Write some side stories, ne? I enjoy your writing lots. Keep up the good work.
cheers!
- Lady Jade
person AngelLife
schedule April 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How can there only be 8 reviews for this fic? It's a brilliant and awesome totally surpb piece of work! I love it! ^_^ You are very a shibby person! Ooh write a sequel with Yuugi and Yami's 'chains' fun. ^-^ Somemore truth or dare too would be cool. This is fantabolus!! Ja ne! ^_^
person DemonDarknessWanderer
schedule March 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Did you post this story first on Fanfiction.net? i think i read it and the chocolate one and put them on my favorites list, then they got taken off. really good plot and story and such. good portrayal of emotions. ^_^

~*~DDW~*~
person Friend
schedule March 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Get the lemons out, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!