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Wow... that was so good. (Glad Set was uke too... it seemed he might not be at first ^^) That was really incredibly good, though.

Okay, off to stalk you some more. Or at least read the sequel :P

SG

My chest seriously tightened at the last sentence. T_T so sad!!!!!

Dear Ra, that was wonderful....;_; and SAD! I am looking forward to your sequel!

~Les
Speaketh the Truth.

*lip quivers* you almost made me cry at the end. I My chest hurts. I can almost feel the heartbreak.poor yami.

Wow! Really well done! Keep up the great work!!

Okay, I have to admit, I was wary of reading your fic in the beginningauseause the summary didn't sound too good (I can't stand those AE stories where "oooh--power struggle between Pharaoh and his High Priest, sex games abound!"). Don't feel bad, because I'm horrible at summaries, too--I have my sister do them for us. But...it was really late and I was desperate, now now I'm glad I did take the time to read it (uh, except for the part where now I'm kinda depressed, lol). Your fic was very well written, and I love stories that take place in Egypt, but am frequently disappointed by terrible characterization. Not the case, with yours. Very sad, but realistic, I suppose. Heh, that "I'm here, Set, stop looking at the Millennium rod!" part had me cracking up. Great job, and I hope to see some more stuff from you in the future. ^_^

that was really, really well written

*whistle* That was /excellent/.

It's so hard to find Pharaoh/Seto stories that I'm willing to read any I come across, but this was very well-written. I like your of of details, such as the shadow and the near-sunstroke, and the ending, where their thoughts were similar and yet so different.

This was a fun story to read. Thank you for writing it.

Wow what an amazing story!!
I liked this a lot!!!
It was so different in plot line to what usual Set/Atemu storys are!
Well done!!
Much Luv,
Debs xxx

That was an incredible fic. I usually don't care for Yu-Gi-Oh fics set in the past. This one kept my attention though. I was wondering about Set's name. I'm used to seeing it spelled Seth. Why is there a difference? Is it because of the Japanese to English translation. I was alsnderndering if you were going to make a sequel. The fic is fine on its own. I was only wondering. Keep up the good work. ;^)


~VB