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for Breaking my world

by Sux

person Fire_Song
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good one ^_^. Keep it up!
person Midnyte Wolf
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gasp* Must it really end like that!? It was such a lovely story to the end!...But ne wayz cute cute cute cute cute cute chappie! *squeals* Great job with this story, loved it! Can never tell ya that enough....loved it loved it!!! lol It's also a shame that it had to end there, but oh well still was funny and very cute! *claps* Lovely job with this fic! Let me know if you write ne more SetoxMokuba fics!....or if ya have...And again, great job with this one!
person Midnyte Wolf
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*giggles* That chappie was cute! I likt. *t. *grins from ear to ear* And if i'm thinking right, I like were it is going. But ne wayzzzz, great chappie! Really sweet! Update soon, I can't wait to see if what I'm thinking is going to happen, going to happen.
person Hikari
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwww!!! This was so kawaii!! Please write more, i'm glad that you did decide to continue it. I loved the part where Mokuba said what he was doing for homework and how Kaiba fainted.

Keep up the good wor Hik
person Midnyte Wolf
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me again! *waves* Well since I replied to the other story of yours, why not the sequel? Hm, however, this was really short to be a sequel at all. Ya know, you should have just made this the second chapter! lol There was really no need for a sequel. But, I liked it all the same. I hope ya write more on it! Ja ne!