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for Carved in Stone

by MarikIshtar77

person Rurouni_agra and Yami Kitsune
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Rurouni_agra: Well, I've finally got my act together and I'm reviewing! Great chapter (as always) and I can't wait for more.
Yami Kitsune: Hn. You just felt guilty because 77 here reviewed for us and you NEVER review anymore.
Rurouni_agra: -_- well neither do YOU!
Yami Kitsune: You know I only review if I like the story anyway. Usually I just let you jabber at them.
Rurouni_agra: *glare* ANYWAY... ... like I said, great fic (as was its predecessor)
Yami Kitsune: We are not happy to admit that we have been following the whole story but never reviewing. It was her fault *points to Rurouni*
Rurouni_agra: HEY! Kitsune no baka! *whacks Kitsune over head* Yea, we're sorry, and we will make it up to you by reviewing every chance we get until you get sick of us!
Yami Kitsune: We will? *rubs head*
Rurouni_agra: We will.
Yami Kitsune: *sigh* In which case I will rant to you later about how good you are. Ja.
person Kat
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the chapter!

"Joey grinned as he carefully put his stick into a red velvet lined, black leather case."
*laughs* clue number one that your boyfriend is a pool hustler *points to sece*:ce*: he has his own cue!

"...Mokuba impersonated the voice of a very old woman. He was on the phone with making another prank call to Duke Devlin."
*gasps* Oh my god! *falls over laughing* I'd love to read Devlin's half of that call!!

Damn, Noa needs an attitude adjustment. With Joey's fist, I'm thinking....

“My goodness sonny, it’s that big? I don’t know if my old bones could handle that! You would break this old lady in two! Ooooh!”
*wheezes and holds sides* Oh gods... it just gets better!!

The interaction between Seto and Joey is always good in this story. I was surprised by Seto's reaction to the news. At first. I gotta admit, the reaction made me snicker when I read this:
“I forgive you for kissing the little puke if you forgive me for being an ass.”

Only Seto would ralph up his toenails and then call Yugi a little puke. *snickers*

Poor Serenity. Can one hope that she'll get out of that mess? *squints in confusion* Does Mokuba know what Noa's doing to her??

"Joey covered his ears with his hands and made a face."
*laughs* I can almost hear him yelling "Dat's too much information!"

Woohoo! I can't wait to see what trouble those two cause in Mexico. *EG* Warn the Federales, folks!

KB
person White Nymph
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mokuba and Noah are sooo bad! Have you been watching too much Simpsons? oh and i liked the bike thing you did, it was very good giving Tristian the Honda!!! I applauded! But what were Tristian and Honda meant to do on the I (was it the pinball machine)? but yay! a new chapter!
White Nymph!
person deb
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg!! Whats wrong with Malik?????
Hehe and the phone calls were awesome!! Sooo funny!!
So yamis going to Egypt huh? *grumbles* lucky for some hehehe
Ppllleeassee update again soonies! I love it sooo sooo much!!!
Off to read Yams torture now!! Mwahahaha!
Yami: *shrieks* SHUT UP!!!
XP hehe
Much Luv
Debs xxx
person Nightmare
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapie and we don't mind them being late as long as they are really good like this one. I really really enjoyed this (and thanks for the alternate address) and I hope that you patch things up between Joey and Seto. Yami can't leave Yugi!!!!!!!! and whats up with Malik fainting???? (I have the sinking feeling that he is in some way united with the old king "Malik" and the light and dark tablet.

Great Story LUV NIGHTMARE!!!!!!!!!!!
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*ring ring*
Hello? Is Mr. Jazz there? First name Hugh.
Yes, I can hold for a second.

LOL - Mokuba and Noa are hilarious!! Ah, the good old days (before call ID) when I used to do that with my brother... hehehe

Gotta love Malik's post-coital light show, it made me lol for real! And he's fainting? What's going on!!

So Yami's going to Egypt, eh? This should be interesting... :)

More soon!!

Tanya~
person Reili
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^^ Ah, no problem! I like your stories! They are *very* good. Mwuah. (I'm very creepy today! w00t!) Anyways, what's up with these stone tablets? They're actually making me think!! Nooo!!! Oh, the horror!

... Meh. It's all good. Anyways, where's the Bakura and Marik?? Mmm, bishounen ... *stares off into space* Ah, sorry! Dozed off. Stupid prairie weather. Oh well. Anyways, WONDERFUL update!! I hope you update again! SOON! I love this story. Yummy yummy egypt and Ryou and Malik and their lovely darker halves ... Mwuahahaa.
person Elle-Fate2x1
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chappy! Can't wait until the next one!!
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Actually, start with a dictionary. Look up the word “blighter.” While you’re at it, contemplate what it would mean in the sentence, “My yami is a blighter. I’ve got somewhere else to be now, okay?"

LMAO!! OMG, I just *love* Ryou! He's such a sweetie, can't wait for more of him and Malik. The preview for "my pet yami" was hilarious - I can't wait to read it on Monday!! Love ya like always!

Tanya~
person Nightmare
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool good chapie and wow! i didn't know that Ryou had it in him, but you have to say he was over the top what 'Kura found out is really important.