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Cool chapter I haven't been on the net for days my computer was stuffed. I can't wait to read the next bit. Lets see Yami/Yugi and Duke/Serenity oh my god two lemons next chapie Yes! Whats up with Malik? he really needs to get out of the sun. But yeah really cool chapie

Luv Nightmare

:O Is Malik having a dream-flashback thingy?? Aww, I wish I was there to comfort him ;) *holds up plate of Duke's brownies* These are for you if you write the next chapter soon! ;);)

Tanya~

Oooo Now I gotta catch up on that other story about Yami! I feel sorry for the guy, ya know? I about hurt myself laughing at Ryou's translations of what Malik said. That was hysterical.

Oh gods, Alice B. Toklas brownies?! *falls over laughing*

Loved this installment!

KB

Excellent Chapter, it was definatly a LOL!!!! love the brownies idea it was ace! and its nice that Yugi still loves Yami after everything.
White Nypmh

Hehe, Seto has to take Joey on a vacation now! Sucker! Mwuah. And bad bad Noa. How dare he hit Serenity. I'm going to come after him with a sledgehammer now. or a knife. Both will suffice nicely. Anyways, very good chapter. Joey's smarter than he looks! Always a good thing. You must update soon!

OMG!! NOA! I hope someone hurts him...soon. Very soon. Preferably Serenity, lol...I have this weird picture in my mind of her high-kicking him in the face... *oddness* And omg, HAGATHA!! LMAO!! I *love* Mokie!! Great chapter!!

Tanya~

grrrr..that Noa, I don't particularly like Serenity all that mucdh but he shouldn't be slapping her about! Ra Damn him! ^_^ yay Joey and Seto have made it up and are going on holiday, i knew he'd forgive him for kissing Yugi! anyway good chapter and keep going, need more
WN

Aww poor Serenity with the Cherry Soda...and Hagatha LMAO! Oh God, please let Duke fid out about that later!
That'd be sooo damned hilarious!!!
Oooo a vacation eh? Niiice....I wish I was rich *glares at Seto*
Excellent chapter huni!! Cant wait to see what happens next....I wonder if Jou will find out...
Much Luv
Debsie xx

Aww poor Serenity with the Cherry Soda...and Hagatha LMAO! Oh God, please let Duke find out about that later!
That'd be sooo damned hilarious!!!
Oooo a vacation eh? Niiice....I wish I was rich *glares at Seto*
Excellent chapter huni!! Cant wait to see what happens next....I wonder if Jou will find out...
Much Luv
Debsie xx

YES!!!!!!! THIS CHAPIE WAS THE BEST SO FAR KICK ASS!!!! speaking off ass kicking Joey has his work cut out for him destorying that worhtless, nogood, pathetic piece of crap!! Seto should have never created him a body. how could Noa beat someone like Serenity? shes so nice and what about Mokie? is he beating her? He's Joey's friend not the guy who lives with his sister abusive *master*. I really feel sorry for her. My reader sence is going crazy $10 says lots of beatings/gore coming up!
But I can't wait for Seto and Joeys vacation. That should be great! And what about Duke and Mai they seem to be the only couple who you haven't writen about. With Yami and Isis going to Egypt it could get very *strange* between all the yami's and is Yugi going to?

Yeah wrote alot but it was a great chapter

LUV NIGHTMARE