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July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me again, I just wanted to know now that Malik is done with 'Kura can I have him *please gives authoress puppy dog eyes*
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, this will be my last review for a while - the boys and I are headed off to the cottage for 2 weeks. God help me...
Yes, England's storms aren't as bad, but there's a severe lack of sunshine. I vote we move to Egypt and find ourselves a couple of Mariks!
Hehe, double lemon!! This makes me happy. Especially Bakura/Malik ;) Aw, now I want to watch battle city. And my dvds are already packed... *curses*
Well, keep writing so I'll have lots to read when I get back!!
See you later!
Tanya~
Yes, England's storms aren't as bad, but there's a severe lack of sunshine. I vote we move to Egypt and find ourselves a couple of Mariks!
Hehe, double lemon!! This makes me happy. Especially Bakura/Malik ;) Aw, now I want to watch battle city. And my dvds are already packed... *curses*
Well, keep writing so I'll have lots to read when I get back!!
See you later!
Tanya~
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*howls* Yami's "thingy".... Given what I've read in the other story, I believe that!
Wo
Wooohooo! No complaints about that lemon! Hot damn! Ramose complained about that image in his head? Ha, fool!
Coconut tanning oil will never be the same again. *EG*
Loved this installment!!
KB
Wo
Wooohooo! No complaints about that lemon! Hot damn! Ramose complained about that image in his head? Ha, fool!
Coconut tanning oil will never be the same again. *EG*
Loved this installment!!
KB
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July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeee! Loved this chapter!!!!!
It was excellent!!!
Bakura/Malik lemon!! YUM!!! Hehehe!!
Cant wait to see what happens next huni!!!
Everythings just so great!!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
It was excellent!!!
Bakura/Malik lemon!! YUM!!! Hehehe!!
Cant wait to see what happens next huni!!!
Everythings just so great!!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! Cool!! Good chapie, I just want to know where Dukes wandering hands are going to lead !! D!! Duke/Serenity lemon!!!!
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Special lemon?? Good stuff. I am definitely looking forward to that. Bakura is such a sexual person. Hehe. Sexual is a fantastic word. Have you ever said that word about 65 times in front of a person who doesn't know what the hell you're on? It's quite amusing. Anyways, I'm looking forward to the update. Ciao.
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, we're getting those storms, too. :(
Malik. Bakura. Egyptian sunshine. Unfortunately, this image may prevent the leaving of a coherent review. Hehe. Can't wait for the next chapter, really really can't wait!
*bounce*
More of My Pet Yami also!
Tanya~
Malik. Bakura. Egyptian sunshine. Unfortunately, this image may prevent the leaving of a coherent review. Hehe. Can't wait for the next chapter, really really can't wait!
*bounce*
More of My Pet Yami also!
Tanya~
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo good chapter! Yami is impotent? Shiiiit, poor guy. Gee ain't it nice that Yugi is so understanding (insert copious amounts of sarcasm)? What I want to know is: did Yami keep all of that, umm, "hardware" that Bakura and Marik uhhh"gav"gave" him?
Malik a king? *EG* Are we going to hear "it's good to be king" comments from him now? *falls over laughing* Malik Cocoa Puff Ishtar!!! Oh my gods, I haven't heard the word Plonker in ages. I about choked.
Oooo teasing with hints of lemon? Here's hoping AFF.net stays online!
KB
Malik a king? *EG* Are we going to hear "it's good to be king" comments from him now? *falls over laughing* Malik Cocoa Puff Ishtar!!! Oh my gods, I haven't heard the word Plonker in ages. I about choked.
Oooo teasing with hints of lemon? Here's hoping AFF.net stays online!
KB
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
[CHAPTER 8] - The scene with joey and kaiba was well written ... i could just feel the tension ... damn, babe, you really have some talent here - good job on the actions and emotions ... HOT DAMN ... you were totally turnin me on with the ryou/malik lemon *snicker* i love how you are not too descriptive, yet you describe just the right amount of ..er.. smut ... haha ... kama sutra, eh? think i can borrow that book when they're done?! *waggles eyebrows* ... oh dear, the scene with yami and yugi... cuteness!! *wants baby*
" Ryou rarely saw Bakura so passionate about something that didn’t have anything to do with revenge or sex. Ryou took a mental note to mark the day on the calender. He even considered making it a holiday. " LOL!!! oh BAKU!
[CHAPTER 9] - wow, hot sex scene babe! ... i love how you write ryou/malik ... hehehe ... cuteness with yami and his baby!! omg LOL with mokuba! haha, the kid's a joker!!! ^_^ i was rolling on the floor laughing when he made the crank-call ... :D good one! ... oh duke/tris ... now there's a hot pairing! good job
[CHAPTER 10] - oh my good ... wow ... the part with joey & kaiba ... holy shit babe! i could feel the tension ... i was listening to "everytime" by britney spears :P when i was reading it ... check out the lyric's! it fits there! hot damn! ... OMG!! NOA?!?! ahhh!!! he's evil!! *saves mokie* noooo!!!! ... oh man, i (L) the relationship between joey and his sis ... good job ... great job on joey's character *smiles* ... they all seem pretty in character! hehe
[CHAPTER 11] - oh hot sexy naked marik, under the egyptian sun ... what more can a fangirl ask for?! ^_^ ... cuteness with duke and his brownies ... *makes him some* "Something had changed inside Yami since his traumatic experience of being ‘Bakura’s bitch’ for a month, and he’d found himself second guessing everybody around him. The constant nagging feeling thatple ple were taking advantage of him hindered his trust. Even though Yugi had proved time and time again that he loved Yami unconditionally, the thought thagi wgi was only using him crossed his mind several times a day." that was deep ... good job on connecting past chappies! ^_^ LOL - leave it to duke to slip something in the brownies
and there you have it, my long-ass review, detailing what i felt as i was reading the chapters!! i know this is much over-due, please forgive me! i absolutely love what you are doing with this story, and i cant wait untill you update!! you are a goriteriter ... more please!! thanks!!
*hugs*
-diablo
" Ryou rarely saw Bakura so passionate about something that didn’t have anything to do with revenge or sex. Ryou took a mental note to mark the day on the calender. He even considered making it a holiday. " LOL!!! oh BAKU!
[CHAPTER 9] - wow, hot sex scene babe! ... i love how you write ryou/malik ... hehehe ... cuteness with yami and his baby!! omg LOL with mokuba! haha, the kid's a joker!!! ^_^ i was rolling on the floor laughing when he made the crank-call ... :D good one! ... oh duke/tris ... now there's a hot pairing! good job
[CHAPTER 10] - oh my good ... wow ... the part with joey & kaiba ... holy shit babe! i could feel the tension ... i was listening to "everytime" by britney spears :P when i was reading it ... check out the lyric's! it fits there! hot damn! ... OMG!! NOA?!?! ahhh!!! he's evil!! *saves mokie* noooo!!!! ... oh man, i (L) the relationship between joey and his sis ... good job ... great job on joey's character *smiles* ... they all seem pretty in character! hehe
[CHAPTER 11] - oh hot sexy naked marik, under the egyptian sun ... what more can a fangirl ask for?! ^_^ ... cuteness with duke and his brownies ... *makes him some* "Something had changed inside Yami since his traumatic experience of being ‘Bakura’s bitch’ for a month, and he’d found himself second guessing everybody around him. The constant nagging feeling thatple ple were taking advantage of him hindered his trust. Even though Yugi had proved time and time again that he loved Yami unconditionally, the thought thagi wgi was only using him crossed his mind several times a day." that was deep ... good job on connecting past chappies! ^_^ LOL - leave it to duke to slip something in the brownies
and there you have it, my long-ass review, detailing what i felt as i was reading the chapters!! i know this is much over-due, please forgive me! i absolutely love what you are doing with this story, and i cant wait untill you update!! you are a goriteriter ... more please!! thanks!!
*hugs*
-diablo
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July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“I saw you and got the sudden urge to fuck, you interested in a quick screw in the sand, Ishtar?”
Malik chuckled lightly as he rubbed the sleep out of his eyes.
“I take it you want me to get Marik than, eh?”
Bakura cupped Malik’s chin in his hand and pulled him into a forceful kiss. He licked his lips as he pulled away.
“No Cocoa Puff, I want you for a change. Now strip down, blondie. It’s time for you to experience a REAL dark fuck!”
LOL ... can i be his cocoa puff?!?! hahaha, geeze, babe, that was quite the chapter ... hehe ... malik/bakura lemon eh?!? damn, ur like a lemon-machine... lemonaid anyone? ^_~ this story is totally making me love duke... more of him please? *gropes him* heheh -_-
great work, i loved it, as expected ... ^_^
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE ... PLEASE!!! SOON!!!! *rushes off to change name to "cocoa puff"*
-diablo
Malik chuckled lightly as he rubbed the sleep out of his eyes.
“I take it you want me to get Marik than, eh?”
Bakura cupped Malik’s chin in his hand and pulled him into a forceful kiss. He licked his lips as he pulled away.
“No Cocoa Puff, I want you for a change. Now strip down, blondie. It’s time for you to experience a REAL dark fuck!”
LOL ... can i be his cocoa puff?!?! hahaha, geeze, babe, that was quite the chapter ... hehe ... malik/bakura lemon eh?!? damn, ur like a lemon-machine... lemonaid anyone? ^_~ this story is totally making me love duke... more of him please? *gropes him* heheh -_-
great work, i loved it, as expected ... ^_^
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE ... PLEASE!!! SOON!!!! *rushes off to change name to "cocoa puff"*
-diablo