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Hmm, why is Duke so surprised? or I am forgetting something major? Probably. I go for my license tomorrow, and I'm not feeling that good about it. Godo chapter though. mm, Seto lemon. It was grand. I hope to see a new chapter soon.

Excellent chapter huni!!!
Oooo Mokuba and Serenity!! I cant wait for that!! I wonder what Noa will think about it hehe *grins*
And whats up with Duke and Tristan...weird flashbacks and voices...oooo...
REALLY cant wait to see what happens next!!!
*orders* WRITE GIRL WRITE!!!
Please update again soonies!
Much Luv
Debs xxx

aLas! you've updated this...very tensing, i love how you make every character sound like they really are Real...i wish -_- But once again Update so i can understand what's gonna happen next...BTW nice way of having a Cliffie! ^^ *later*

Good!!! nice to see that Mokies not in to beating Serenity good old Joey he can melt Setos heart of ice anyday!!! what does Isis need with Duke and whats going on in Egypt.

If I sit around on my butt all day I’ll look like Jabba the Hutt! Besides, I like doing nice things for Noa. That’s what girlfriends do, you know.”

“Only in fairy tales! Every girlfriend I’ve ever had expects me to kiss HER ass! Damn! I must be doing something wrong. Why can’t I find myself a pretty little sweety like you?”

$10 prize to that remark and off topic Star Wars IV, V and VI are the best!!!

Nightmare

Yeah cool chapie. That Bastard Why is Noa so abusive?? and what about Mokuba is he like Noa. When Seto and Joey get back they might as well destroy the atupid prick. Oh and thanks for the 8 by 10's of 'Kura *Snatchs one*

I'm going away for 2 and a half weeks so I'm not gonna be able to reveiw, sniff, I'm gonna miss your stories. this was a good chapter, i liked how holo-joey beat kaiba! I really think that serenity should sort noa out though!!! keep up the good work
White Nymph

Oooo this is getting mysterious....whats up with Malik?
The writing on the tablet is strange too...i wonder what it could mean...
Another excellent chapter huni!
I really really cant wait to see what happens next! Seriously im on the edge of my seat and Marik can barely restrain me....hes great with those ropes tho...hehehe ^_____^
Please update again soonies!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
*grabs Bakura pic and runs from Marik* Mwahahaha! Cant catch me! *falls down a hole* -_____________- MARIK!!!!!!

*takes a pic* Oooo Nice!!

Enjoy the family time! Okay, survive the happy family crap. *snicker* Which ever works.

Longer chapters... this is a good thing!

Loved this installment. Ooo Joey whooping Seto's ass in a duel. That was gooood! Yam Yami, not even his son wants to spend time with him. Yugi as "ma ma ma ma" I LOVE THAT!! *laughs hysterically* Perfect!

KB

Your peace offering is definitely accepted. Mwuah. Okay, Noa is such a little creep. Someone should projectile vomit at him. Yes, projectile vomit. That's an awesome (gross) mental image. Whoop. Well, even if you can't update soon, you can still update once a week and I'm glad. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter when it gets posted. Ciao.

Cool chapie!! Whats happening one Seto and Joey's holiday *wink* Yay for lemons!!