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for Carved in Stone

by MarikIshtar77

person Arias5
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok..AFF.net is being weird...but anyways! YOU UPDATED THIS! yay for you!
the lemon was a good way to apoligize! it was wonderful ^_^
do i see a yugi/joey lemon next?! hehe that would be great, ne?
What will happen to Serenity? i hope that Noa dies >.< i never liked him newayz!
but then again...will never know what'll happen until you update, right?
*~peace*~
person Deb
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg omg omg!!
*runs around in circles*
Niiiice lemon huni heh heh heh ^_~
Jou and Yugi stuff too! Kool! I thought something might happen again with those two. Its the whole ex-love-of-your-life saga.
And wheres Yamiiiiii.......??? Please let him be ok....if hes not he'll hate you Care hehe ^_^
So Mokuba's found out about Noa and Serenity then...i wonder what he's gonna do....something noble i bet hehe ^_~
Cant wait to see what happens next!!!!!!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
person dissention
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay im so glad your back and feeling better after your hiatus from this story, its great
person Nightmare
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow an update. What the crap talking toasters??? whats Noa doing now that bastard!!
“Whatta cute widdle guy, you wook just wike your weirdo uncle Malik, you poor widdle fing.” Great line here, who new Joey could speak baby?

please update soon Luv Nightmare
person Reili
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bakura/Marik lemon? You just officially became my hero. And Yami is, kidnapped? Or was he taken by aliens, too? Mwuahaha. I suck. I haven't read this story in such a while, I almost forgot what was happening. I shall re-read it somet Yes Yes, yes I shall. In the meanwhile, I wish you good wishes, and I hope to see another chapter soon!
person Arias5
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! CiS is updated...lol...talking toaster..wtf?!
and that Uncle Joey might be a bad influence on Solon...^.^
that's great that your feeling better and your muses have popped out ..maybe you can introduce us to them..?
did i hear a marik/baku lemon ........my gods you MUST update frequently.......i can't wait!
*~brings out the lemon cookies*~
person Deb
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter as usual huni!!
Poor Yams!! Where is he????
I know hes been mean lately Care but you didnt have to kill him off! Hehehe ^_^
LOL and Jous line about Solon being poor coz he looks like Malik was so funny!! Haha!
Oh and Tristan talking to the toaster was....interesting lmao!!!
Please update soonies!!!!
Much Luv and Huggles
Debs xxx
person Nightmare
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.K. this is most likely going to be a wierd review but to hells with it. Remember the Trial by Nightmare and Through Hell and back for more I was rereading them and kind of wondering if you were ever going to write a third, like I said its a wierd review but the question has been bouncing off the walls of my empty head so yeah I just had to write it. ALL HAIL BAKURA!!!
person Debs
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter huni!!!
Aww poor Malik...whats up with him???
And Tristan...spooky stuffs happening....^_~
I cant wait to see whats going to happen next!
I wonder what Ryou will say when he finds his name on the text!
Eeeee! So kool!!
Please update again soonies huni!!
Chat laterz!
Much Luv
Debs xxxx
person Nightmare
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon AHHH!!! I'm shriveling uo and dying without your work AHHH *turns into a pile of dust*