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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woah, i can't believed wat just happened...things are starting to change and the plot also...it kinda intrigues me! I like the new twist..keep it up!
i'll wait for your next update...until then...
~*peace!*~
i'll wait for your next update...until then...
~*peace!*~
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November 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!
Bloody strange and intriguing!!! I wanna see what happens now!!!!!
Malik to Marik....Bakura back to his old self without memories....this is so strange hehehehe FUN!
Please update soon!!
Me cant waiiitttt!!!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
Bloody strange and intriguing!!! I wanna see what happens now!!!!!
Malik to Marik....Bakura back to his old self without memories....this is so strange hehehehe FUN!
Please update soon!!
Me cant waiiitttt!!!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
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November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hello there. About chapter 15... jaja... that was funny... the Spanish part: smut in spanish sounds so bad... that's why I prefer to write in English. Only few corrections: Dragon Blanco de ojos azules (blue eyed white dragon or whatever it's called) and Perrito malo (not mal perrito).
I'm really angry. I don't know if it's my computer's fault or it's this site that's in one of it's "moods", but some chapters appear incomplete and there are cut words and that kind of annoying stuff... are you posting this fic on a different site?
and if you ever need help with the Spanish/English translation, mail me and I'll gladly help you (I wanna be a translator after all... it's my vocation).
keep up the good job!
I'm really angry. I don't know if it's my computer's fault or it's this site that's in one of it's "moods", but some chapters appear incomplete and there are cut words and that kind of annoying stuff... are you posting this fic on a different site?
and if you ever need help with the Spanish/English translation, mail me and I'll gladly help you (I wanna be a translator after all... it's my vocation).
keep up the good job!
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November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hello there. About chapter 15... jaja... that was funny... the Spanish part: smut in spanish sounds so bad... that's why I prefer to write in English. Only few corrections: Dragon Blanco de ojos azules (blue eyed white dragon or whatever it's called) and Perrito malo (not mal perrito).
I'm really angry. I don't know if it's my computer's fault or it's this site that's in one of it's "moods", but some chapters appear incomplete and there are cut words and that kind of annoying stuff... are you posting this fic on a different site?
and if you ever need help with the Spanish/English translation, mail me and I'll gladly help you (I wanna be a translator after all... it's my vocation).
keep up the good job!
I'm really angry. I don't know if it's my computer's fault or it's this site that's in one of it's "moods", but some chapters appear incomplete and there are cut words and that kind of annoying stuff... are you posting this fic on a different site?
and if you ever need help with the Spanish/English translation, mail me and I'll gladly help you (I wanna be a translator after all... it's my vocation).
keep up the good job!
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November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the newest chapter! It reminds me of my story 'Who Will Save Me?'. Can't wait to read more!
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woohoo for Yami...hehe...nasty thoughts popping up, and i forgive ur muses...now we know what happened to Yami. ^__^hehe...you must write more!
~*peace*~
~*peace*~
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November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool another update! personaly I wouldn't be trying very hard to escape from Yamis prediciment, unless somthing wierd was about to happen (we know it is)
Hows Ucky Doey going to reacte when he finds out about Serenity??? please destory Noa (I really, really, really hate him)
See ya Nightmare
Hows Ucky Doey going to reacte when he finds out about Serenity??? please destory Noa (I really, really, really hate him)
See ya Nightmare
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey. I was reading "Hellraisers" and I liked it a lot so I decided to check out your stuff. I just finished reading "Love lies" and I liked it a lot too, so I'm going to start reading the sequel.
Now, the point: while reading Love lies I found a little mistake. In that scene where Seto invited Joey for dinner and there was this Carlotaid aid and she spoke in Spanish... she said "for real"... well, the translation for that isn't "para verdadero". The correct way of saying it is: "¿en serio?" or "¿de verdad?". And "Thak you" is "Muchas gracias" and you spelled it "MuchOs gracias"... believe me, my first language is Spanish, so I should know (hohohoho). I kind of laughed a lot with this "para verdadero" thingy... it sounds really funny.
I hope I'll like the sequel as much as the first s, I , I really enjoyed it.
I'll let you know
Lots of love...
Now, the point: while reading Love lies I found a little mistake. In that scene where Seto invited Joey for dinner and there was this Carlotaid aid and she spoke in Spanish... she said "for real"... well, the translation for that isn't "para verdadero". The correct way of saying it is: "¿en serio?" or "¿de verdad?". And "Thak you" is "Muchas gracias" and you spelled it "MuchOs gracias"... believe me, my first language is Spanish, so I should know (hohohoho). I kind of laughed a lot with this "para verdadero" thingy... it sounds really funny.
I hope I'll like the sequel as much as the first s, I , I really enjoyed it.
I'll let you know
Lots of love...
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hello again. I haven't finished reading this yet... I'm relly tired right now and I have classes early tomorrow. I just thougd lid live a little review before I went to bed.
I really liked the Ryou/Malik lemon in chapter 9. It was so sweet. I love the relationship they have.
Mokuba's prank phone call was just too funny... laughed a lot. Actually I spat some of the coffee I was drinking on my keyboard (just dandy! poor keyboard of mine: juice, cigarrette burns and ashes, tomato s and and now coffee!)
(I quote)"The colors that were shooting out of me! Lordy it was hideous! Blues, and greens, and reds.......chunks of turquoise! I thought I was dyin’! I saved that shit as evidence!” ----> damn, that really was hilarious.
What's the deal with those eating habits? pizza, nachos, bacon for breakfast (is it healthy to eat so much fat in the morning?)... (did you know that Texas is the most obese city? state? in the world? every time me and my friends see a fat person, we say "that guy must be from Texas" or "that guy is Texas-sized" (like when they super-size your combo at McDonalds) etc). Seriously, it is kind of disturbing the amount of gross junk food they put in their stomachs. By now I guess they should really be texas-sized: not even a god-like metabolism could work against that huge amount of saturated fats. (I'm sorry if I offended someone with this, but just as smoking, being fat is a desease. Not healthy, no, no, no. People say that smoking is a bad habit, which it is, but when you call a people "fat", they say you're discriminating them when in reality you're just trying to make them conscious they should get help... I'm trying to quit smoking so I hope I don't sound like an hypocrite).
Maybe the last part was a bit out of context, sorry I couldn't help myself. I'll give you more of my opinions when I continue reading.
Cheers!
I really liked the Ryou/Malik lemon in chapter 9. It was so sweet. I love the relationship they have.
Mokuba's prank phone call was just too funny... laughed a lot. Actually I spat some of the coffee I was drinking on my keyboard (just dandy! poor keyboard of mine: juice, cigarrette burns and ashes, tomato s and and now coffee!)
(I quote)"The colors that were shooting out of me! Lordy it was hideous! Blues, and greens, and reds.......chunks of turquoise! I thought I was dyin’! I saved that shit as evidence!” ----> damn, that really was hilarious.
What's the deal with those eating habits? pizza, nachos, bacon for breakfast (is it healthy to eat so much fat in the morning?)... (did you know that Texas is the most obese city? state? in the world? every time me and my friends see a fat person, we say "that guy must be from Texas" or "that guy is Texas-sized" (like when they super-size your combo at McDonalds) etc). Seriously, it is kind of disturbing the amount of gross junk food they put in their stomachs. By now I guess they should really be texas-sized: not even a god-like metabolism could work against that huge amount of saturated fats. (I'm sorry if I offended someone with this, but just as smoking, being fat is a desease. Not healthy, no, no, no. People say that smoking is a bad habit, which it is, but when you call a people "fat", they say you're discriminating them when in reality you're just trying to make them conscious they should get help... I'm trying to quit smoking so I hope I don't sound like an hypocrite).
Maybe the last part was a bit out of context, sorry I couldn't help myself. I'll give you more of my opinions when I continue reading.
Cheers!
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! an update. oh my god, oh my god what is Seto going to do, what happens when he finds out about Joey and Yugi oh the horror! the horror!
please update soon!!!! (either this or Hellraisers)
Luv Nightmare
please update soon!!!! (either this or Hellraisers)
Luv Nightmare