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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was great *pout* Stopping just before the lemon is ebil!! You're so mean!! *sniffle* You better update tomorrow! I don't think I can wait any longer for that lemon!
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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAARRRRRGGGGHHHHH!! Pl Please...please...I'm begging you...no more lemonus interuptus!
I started to get a warm and fuzzy and then...BAM! I had to shut it down...
***Sticks out tingue***
Sigh...luv ya anywho
Kisses...Xeno
I started to get a warm and fuzzy and then...BAM! I had to shut it down...
***Sticks out tingue***
Sigh...luv ya anywho
Kisses...Xeno
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool. Whats going to happen next and hows David going to take the fact his son his gay and has an ancient spirt in his body
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
are you gonna continue to write about the other relationships you were writing about in Love Lies? I really hope so!
It was an exellent start to your new story and I hope that you post the next chapter soon
It was an exellent start to your new story and I hope that you post the next chapter soon
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Sequel!! Can't wait to see what our boys get up to in Egypt! Ace Bakura...>< I was just bitten by a gigantic plot bunny called Ace Bakura: Pet Detective. But it's scary, so I'm going to smash it with my math book. hehe. Dave is my dad's name, too. Hmmm, it'll be interesting to see how Ryou explains Bakura to his father. Can't wait for more of the same!
Tanya~
Tanya~
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start, and I sure want to know what comes next! ^^ Poor Ryou's father... quite troublesome those two, hmm? Seems there's going to have to be explanations sooner or later... Good work!
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
w00t, Marik and Bakura! I love those two with all my heart. You make them out to be very amusing, yup yup. Ah man, I already know I'm going to love this sequal. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*falls over laughing* Ace?! Love it. Ryou's dad is in for such a riiiiide!!
I can't wait to see what Marik and Bakura do next!
KB
I can't wait to see what Marik and Bakura do next!
KB
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I'm just wondering, though, are any of the other characters going to make appearances in this story? I'd really like to know what happened to the others from "Love Lies"...
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good start...one typo. "Marik dropped his luggage..." shouln't that be Malik instead?
Sorry, your story...thought I would help and be your first review.
Luv Xeno
Sorry, your story...thought I would help and be your first review.
Luv Xeno