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for Carved in Stone

by MarikIshtar77

person Deb
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe!! Glad you liked the pics!!! Lol! Inspiration....that's another word for it!
Damn right i'd lick the camel!!!!! LMAO!!!! For Bakura, i'd do anything.....and if that means licking some dead animal! Then so be it! Hehehehe!!!
Excellent chappie huni!! I can't wait to see what happens with Kura in the next chapter! Should be great!!! ^__^
OMG!!! Yugi and Jou!!! Am i crazy? Or was that just the best thing! lol! Wonder whats going to happen with Mokuba...hmm....
How many did the cat finally have? lol i know that she was still going when i chatted 2 you...hope ur not overrun lmao!!!
Pleeeeease update again sooooonies!! The tension is so much now you said about something happening to Kura! I need to knowwww!!! *grins*
Much Luv!
Debs xxxx
person Elle-Fate2x1
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yummy! That was very yummy lemon! I liked it! So what's the significance of the Summerians? Does it have anything to do with the Goddess Ishtar or is it something to do with Marik himself??? Wah! Update k?
person White Nymph
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO!!!! Yugi and Joey can't do that, what about poor Seto!
Are you gonna write anything about what Bakura did with Yami after he completed the Millenium Puzzle? It would beethiething good that could be used against him!
Poor Bakura, what a mean punishment!
^_~
White Nymph
person Nightmare
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapie and yes Bakura did take his 'punishment' very well didn't he? I'm dieing to know what happens to Jeoy and Yugi when Seto finds out and whats Mokies problem? Did he get the stripper pregant?
person Kat
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cracks up* Bakura would like the ice idea! Given that it's in the mid-todatoday, I may just keep the ice given the fact Bakura's neck is just fine. *blinks* Yup, he's fine all right.

Loved the punishment Ryou meted out! Dayum, that was just hot.

Oooo Joey and Yugi kissing??? Does this mean a JoeyXYugi lemon next chapter? I can't wait to find out what that phone call Noa and Mokuba made to Seto is all about.

Kama Sutra and Malik... *fans self and cranks up the aircon* Whew... I'd like to see that.

Ooo kittens!! *talks to self* No no no, no more kitties. Lucifer gets way too jealous. Oh well, I hope they're all healthy, even if they have interrupted everything. *g*

KB
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude, that's just evil... there's like a million cliffies in there!! What's going on with Mokuba? *twitches* Joey... kissing... Yugi ... *electro-shocks both of them* Nobody cheats on Kaiba!!

Thankies so much for the Ryou/Bakura goodness!! Bakura's in for it, eh? *worried* Yup yup, send Ryou over with the Aloe any time ;) hehehe.

Oh - and when Bakura scared Ryou in the soul room. How odd is this? My bro did that to me like 15 mins ago!! I jumped a mile and had to close all my slash sites at top speed!

Great chapter, can't wait til Wednesday!!

Tanya~

PS - kitties!! congrats to ur cat!
person Nightamare
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter. It was great when Seto walked in on Mokie and the stripper whats he going to do to them???? And what kind of *punishment* can Ryou think up for Bakura?
person Reili
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I feel like a prick for not reviewing the last two chapters. I'm all scared to go on this site now because it takes forever to load anything and it fails half the time anyway. -__-WellWell, anyways, good chapter! Marik and Bakura found some ancient artifacts, now would you have it? Hehe, best phrase ever. And w00t! Bakura and Marik lemons! Ah, I gots to love them. I really do. Anyways, once again, SPLENDID chapter, and I'm looking forward to the update!
Oh, and here's ndomndom phrase for you: "I took the babies!"
(Hehe)
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG - “Actually- I don’t know jack shit about them. Ryou’s telling me all this through our link” Bakura smirked. LMAO!! Aw, what a bastard - getting all burnt and then leaving Ryou to deal with it. *smacks Baku*

LOL - and and and - Go Mokie, it's yo' birthday! We gonna party like it's yo' birthday!! hehehe...what's Kaiba so pissed about? Businessmen and their mood swings...;)

*bounces*SorrSorry bout the funeral, have fun at the wedding and shop twice as hard for me!

Tanya~
person Deb
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sticks hand in air and grabs gel with other* pleeeeeease....can i help rub him down???? ill be gentle hehehe! ^__^
Great chapter huni!! I wonder whats going to happen with Joey and Seto....oh and is something going to happen in the bakura/ryou way when they are in their soul room? *grins* hehehe
LOL go Mokuba! That was surprisingly something i can totally imagine him doing *shuggs* hehe naughty boy....is he 18 yet? Hmmm....lol
Cant wait for the next chapter huni!! I am fidgeting in my seat waiting for the update....*fidgets*
Much Luv!
Debs xxx