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by Naye025

person Rico
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i always thought that honda/tristian in american liked jey not otagi/duke develin in american. but it was a really good story. write something about maku tsunami and joey or joey with bandit keith. thats something i wanna read a story with joey,keith and mako having a three some. or tea being elesbien and fuking serenity or mai. or marik and yugi. possibly mokuba and joey. anyway loved the story and take my idea about bandit keith and joey into concideration for a story. email me. how do u post a story on to this site. see ya
person MarikIshtar77
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool story! I really like how you're characters converse-especially Jou. He cracks me up. Is Honda going to keep his word and protect Otogi? (Or will he get the crap pounded out of him?)

person aspiker
schedule June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello!

So far, so very good with your story. 8-) Honda tales are few and far between. It's a joy to read a well written one. 8-)

Keep he ghe good work!
person ChibiMisu
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it!! ^_^ Tristan and Otagi are a hard couple to come by!! ^_^ please update soon, i wanna know what happens!! poor Otagi. T_T you're a good writer, keep it up!! ^_^v